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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From ANON - Chronostorm on September 25, 2007
    oh ya one more thing if you do a Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi threesome i would like that been looking for like that oh and one with the new female character from the 4th movie (you will have look up stuff on that)
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  • From ANON - Chronostorm on September 25, 2007
    Hmmm that was pretty good wasn't especting a full fledge story behind it but oh well though i am wondering why you would have a hard time seeing him with Hinata then again i guess its a point of view though i can agree with you and Sakura she is the only one on the list that i can't see Naruto ever getting with well besides most of the demons but i can't get a good idea of what they look like as girls so ya well keep it up i guess you can always ask for help on what to do for Hinata.
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  • From ANON - adolthered on September 24, 2007
    Wow ! I must say that your story is magnificent ! Everything in your story as such as character, story's plot and Lemon scene is perfect. You made everything satisfied and complete in one chapter, GOOD JOB !. Keep up your magnificent piece of work. I will wait for next chapter. Good luck.
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  • From Phoenix477 on September 24, 2007
    I love it the characters are in character the emotions you had Naruto & Yugito go though made them seem like real people
    Also you never did say what rank Yugito was Gennin Chunnin Jonin
    Oh and the only spelling error i found was "Alright, just don't drip them." it should be drop

    My requests are

    Uchiha Mikoto (she's the hottest female Naruto character in opinion)
    Inuzuka Hana (Kiba sister)
    Shihouin Yoruichi (Bleach character)
    Kurotsuchi Nemu (Bleach character)
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  • From ANON - Syxx on September 24, 2007
    yo nice, very nice, but how can you forget about Tsunami? anyway looing forward for more
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  • From ANON - Se'irim on September 24, 2007
    I like this... I really like this.
    To tell you the truth, i have read several projects (list of lemons), but this is the first time
    that they actually have a story, and if you are planning on keeping this going, i can tell you that
    it most likely will become the best list on AFF.

    Keep up the good work.

    Se'irim
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  • From ANON - Josh B on September 24, 2007
    Hey I like the story that you started and I hope you make another chapter or make this into a story about Yugito and Naruto being a couple and who knows what can happen after that your choice I like how the story is.... Well the chapter to many chapters of other women....
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi King on September 24, 2007
    What a great ass chapter right there.But I thought something was gonna happen to Yugito like have the Bijuu extracted from her and Naruto goes to the Akatsuki lair and kill them all,before dieing himself..thats what I would've done.But hey it's your story,and I like it.

    You should try putting the Sexy-Jutsu Naruto...or any Character in a female form(though you gotta explain why they are boys,or you can make them be born and stayed as girls)like Fem.Sasuke,Fem.Itachi,etc.

    But the incest part bugs me though,Kushina is probably dead because she was said in the past tense and having Naruto having sex with his twin sister...wow...wierd...but wow...yeah that could happen,like they meet,fall in love,have sex,then finally discover that they are twins.But they'll ignore that and still have sex.

    Shit I think I'm giving you ideas,ahh fuck it you can use those ideas if you want.But if you do give me some fucking credit if you do.

    Ja Ne,
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  • From ANON - komet1987 on September 24, 2007
    WUUUOOHH!! Your Style is great, keep on!
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  • From ANON - TkMacintosh on September 24, 2007
    This seems cool ^^ I wanna read more. I like how your doing a Shitload of chapters each a one shot.

    I'm also wondering....what about Naruto's Sexy Jutsu? Could that be considered a story? or is that to weird and different?
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