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Reviews for Breathe (into me)

By : ExitHere
  • From ANON - ShadouRyoushi (Not registered on AdultFanFic yet) on July 06, 2010
    Great story, I'm hangin' around for the next chapter XD

    Oh, and I'm interesed in becoming you're Beta (E-mail me the chapter/ comment if you're interested X3)

    Keep up the good work! *Thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - puppydog on November 05, 2007
    Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Julia on October 10, 2007
    Awesomeness. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Amysama on September 27, 2007
    It's a good start. It's hard to write in canon while things are still unresolved, but it seems as if this is going to be there. As for a beta, I only noticed a few things, word usage and maybe a run-on. But still a nice piece of work. Keep going and I'll be back to check on ya! Ganbette!
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  • From undercoverfreak on September 27, 2007
    wow, really really good. i have been looking for a good fic since perception ended and this looks quite promising. Jo
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  • From ANON - Ebil Chameleon on September 24, 2007
    This is a really good start. I can't wait to see how it developes. GaaSaku is one of my all time favorite pairings! I'll be waiting for an update for you!

    Ja!
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  • From on September 23, 2007
    I'd be more than willing to beta for you. I need something to do other than mope around and write.

    I'm interested so far, not much else to say at this point. It would be prudent, however, for you to continue, plz. Kthxbai.
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  • From SkippingAlice on September 23, 2007
    I'm impressed. I really didn't think it was going to be this good, for some reason. Update soon, I'm realling looking forward to this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2007
    I'd offer to beta, but I'm swamped as it is! Well, I REALLY wasn't expecting this to be as good as it was. So... good job! I can't wait for more!
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