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By : AcaciaBrown
  • From roro237 on September 18, 2007
    Loving it please don't stop!:) Sorry that was the yaoi fangirl in me:) I want to know what will Sasuke do about his feelings? How does Itachi play into this? I loved the back ground you did on Sasuke in the first chapter and the sassy sparkle back ground you gave Naruto to. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Allys on September 18, 2007
    Ahhh!! You and the evil cliffies!!! That's 2 for 2 so far!! LOL, boy that was quick XD. But I understand the thought processes, LOL, and can see how Sasuke would think it would help to speed things up, LOL, and hje kept going on about Naruto being too slow, XD. As if meeting and fucking usually happen on the day ;). What would he have done if had to wait through a couple dates XD. LOL, and I think I adore your Itachi XD, LOL, *Glomps him and then skitters away from the gun* Heh XD. Do you have any more chapters stored up your sleeve? *crosses fingers and hopes* Thank you so much for the speediness XD, I'm already totally hooked. Update soon? ♥ Ja.
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  • From Kimra on September 18, 2007
    I like you. But I question your need to make a plot - who cares about plot? I like it how it is!
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  • From ANON - Adi (just haven't signed in) on September 18, 2007
    WAH! ok you get your official review here since I dragged you all the way to AFF XD I loved it, I loved how Naruto just kept babbling before he was kissed by Sasuke, I love Sasuke jumping him, I love the whole NaruSasuness of it all. NOW THAT I KNOW YOU CAN WRITE PORN YOU MUST ALWAYS WRITE PORN ALWAYS XD it was an amazing lemon, seriously, I love Naruto's teasing, flirting and cheekiness, and when he met Itachi “How is it that the two of you are so good looking?” *snickers* perfect. (a little sidenote, the italics went wrong somewhere you need to add in a "[/i]" (with the brackets being replaced with the arrowheads) to end the italics)

    LOVE FOR THIS FIC! ASDFGHJKL;'# (yes I have a big head XD)
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  • From Allys on September 18, 2007
    I LOVED IT, LOL, That was an amazing start!! Please write more, right now XD!! Never mind me take your time, Sasuke was hilarious, it was adorable, and Gaara too!! Here's hoping you update soon *hugs*
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  • From ANON - getayaoilover on September 18, 2007
    awesome, sasuke with a crush is super cute! can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 17, 2007
    LOL, I loved this. Its absolutely hilarious and adorable. Please update soon and keep up the good work. Ill be looking for the next chapter.
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  • From Kimra on September 17, 2007
    *glomp* more more more more!

    Oh my might review powers alwasy impress me. :P
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  • From despairs on September 17, 2007
    I enjoyed it so i am reviewing :D I must say that the summary drew me in and the first chapter has me hooked. Very well done!

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