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By : Midnightstorm
  • From Kobanya on June 30, 2011
    I'm so lazy when it comes to reviewing, but if there's voting to be done, I'm on it. :D Anyway, I'm for option 1 aka the perma-awkward threesome. Personally I don't think it *has* to be awkward, but hey, you're writing it. Gotta say I loved this entire chapter; the tension was perfect!
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  • From RYOUMOON on June 29, 2011
    THREESOME!!!! THREESOME!!!! THREESOME!!!! THREESOME!!!! ALL THE WAY!!!!
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  • From AquamarieneStardust on June 29, 2011
    I am all for option 1, I would LOVE to see the three boys together.
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  • From MagicalReality on June 29, 2011
    I'm completely in love with this story and this chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

    In regards to the question you asked, I can't choose between the options! I love SIN and I love SasuNaru so much! But going from this last chapter, I think that I will have to choose SasuNaru. That kiss was so explosive and I love the fiery attraction between the two. I think the threesome is a way for Itachi and Sasuke to move on.

    Oh gosh, I'm babbling now. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Carousel on June 29, 2011
    Chapter 4 was fantastic. You write so well and your style is fantastic. I love how Sasuke and Naruto kissed. It was explosive and actually reminded me of the song "Explosive" by Bond. I personally want all three to get together in a poly relationship. I think all three balance each other out. If it was just SxN then it would be too intense. With Itachi there it evens everything out.
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  • From moodysavage on June 29, 2011
    That chapter four was soooo good!!! There was so much in it and I liked it especially because we got to hear what each of them were thinking. And that alley scene in the rain with Sasuke and Naruto was smokin' hot. I kept thinking of Itachi & Naruto as being dominant over Sasuke because Sasuke was all jealous and crabby at first and uke to Itachi. But that definitely put Sasuke as being able to be dominating too. Reallllly awesome.

    I think with the way this is already written it would be great as Sasuke/Naruto and Itachi with someone else and them all happy. Itachi mentioned Naruto being the one to complete them and allow them to move on. And Itachi and Naruto may be attracted to each other but with Itachi it's more like a brotherly 'I want you to be happy' kind of way which is probably how he feels about Sasuke too even though that's to a greater extent. And Naruto feels comforted by Itachi... brotherly.

    But Sasuke and Naruto? THAT'S where all the sparking and meltdowns and extreme reactions are going on. I think Itachi would eventually see that as Sasuke & Naruto being meant to be together and he'd be happy for them and content that they would be there for each other.
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  • From missbri88 on June 28, 2011
    LOVED the chapter and it should stay a threesome. And I think Sasuke and Naruto should be able to switch sometimes. But awesome chapter!
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  • From obsessiveXmuch on June 28, 2011
    First off, can I say that I love this story? It's so hard for me to choose between SIN and SasuNaru. Normally I would be BEGGING you to keep it SIN because it is my favorite pairing, but I just get the feeling that this is a SasuNaru story. I am not sure if you have even noticed it in your writing, but everything is pointing towards Naruto and Sasuke becoming enamored with each other (in the good way). You kind of always mention Itachi as a side note, or have Naruto always comparing Itachi to Sasuke (and never the other way around ie. comparing Sasuke to Itachi. It's like Naruto can see the similarities between Itachi and Sasuke (like how sasuke looks like itachi but naruto finds sasuke more attractive and enthralling)but he always appreciates Sasuke more. I don't really know, but the way I am reading this story is SasuNaru with Naruto somewhat falling for Itachi because Itachi is a "safer" version of Sasuke. I get that Naruto really does like/love Itachi because he is so nice to him and is a good person, but I see Itachi becoming a big brother figure to Naruto. I feel like the chemistry solely between Naruto and Sasuke is much stronger than the chemistry between the three of them. I love SIN but I think that this story is definitely more of a SasuNaru story with some steamy SIN scenes.
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  • From bridmatt on June 28, 2011
    Option 2, definitely. Option 1 doesn't make as much sense for this story since it's already been established that Sasuke and Itachi are out of love with each other and have been for a while now. (Adding Naruto wouldn't really make them fall back in love with each other in the same way that a woman having a baby won't make her and her husband fall back in love with each other if they've also fallen out of romantic love.) Plus, both brothers seem to want to move on from their relationship, Itachi even mentioned it in this chapter, that he was hoping Naruto could help complete him and Sasuke and then help them move on. As for Naruto and Itachi, they seem to be in the exact same place where Sasuke and Itachi are: they feel "comfort/affection/lust," but that's still the feelings of "brothers with benefits," rather than actual love. The ease of the Itachi + Naruto relationship, Naruto's happiness as being considered family by Itachi, all of those add to the feeling of them being brothers with benefits. They don't have to fight their feelings the way Naruto and Sasuke do because they aren't risking nearly as much emotionally. I think if you went with option 1, it would end up with all of them "happily but awkwardly" being together, as you said. (That's not that great for all parties involved.)

    Alternatively, you could do a compromise between options 1 and 2 where Itachi also finds someone who really pushes his buttons, but the story ends with the understanding that on occasion, if the mood ever strikes, they might still do threesomes (or perhaps foursomes if you put Itachi with someone really hot like Kakashi or Shisui?) But overall, I don't think option 1 would be the happiest possible ending for these particular characters.
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  • From LadyLaran on June 28, 2011
    Itachi balances Sasuke out. Leave them as a trio.

    Even better would be a confrontation between the kids and their never home dads.
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  • From narulov56 on June 22, 2011
    This is so hot! I haven't read a good ItaSasu scene in long time.

    Hm, I prefer ItaNaruSasu, please?

    Don't let such a good story go to waste. Update soon!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 22, 2011
    I love this story. I was soooo disappointed when I reached the end of chapter three and there wasn't anymore yet! Update soon! Please!!!!
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  • From OrochiGreel on June 21, 2011
    ItaNaruSasu, cuz when I read with threesomes with Itachi, Naruto, and Sasuke I like Naruto as the uke.
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  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2011
    *grinning* hehehe...um... write lots more... soon. You did say your plot bunnies returned right? itanarusasu has my vote :)
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  • From krissybear on June 20, 2011
    please let me know when you update! angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com
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