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Reviews for What is sex ?

By : Teme101
  • From bloodyqueen on February 28, 2008
    Your story is cute, even with Naruto just knowing what sex is. I like your story hope you update. OH, and want to be friends?
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  • From bloodyqueen on January 28, 2008
    UPDATE!!!!!!1

    I want to know what is going to happen, please update*crys*
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  • From bloodyqueen on December 05, 2007
    I love it! for the record why is Sasuke being such a bad little boy?
    If you say you are gonna do it, then by golly you are gonna do it.
    Update soon, I want to know what happens.

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  • From PlueOfDoom on November 01, 2007
    cute! Keep it up! ^_^
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  • From spoon10488 on September 19, 2007
    very cool please continue soon.
    =)
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  • From digiditz on September 18, 2007
    Chapters are a bit short but this is a cute idea.
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  • From spoon10488 on September 17, 2007
    pretty good story. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes. Well it good anyway.
    =)
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  • From KitsuneNoMari on September 17, 2007
    I've read a similar fic with a slightly similar plot. But then again, you twisted it differently. And sweetie, you are in dire need of a beta reader. You have one too many mistakes in your work, especially with the spellings. Typo error to be exact.

    I'd like to volunteer as a beta reader but if you don't want one, that's fine.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2007
    That are little naive Naruto. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ChiomaAnago on September 17, 2007
    I can't wait for the next chapter. so far it is good. pls email me when u update it
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  • From Shaquana on September 17, 2007
    Not to be a bitch but.... do u want me to profread your chapters cause there was alot of missing and misspelled words. I don't mind doing it for u if u want. Or u can tell me to fuck off.

    Can't wait till Sasuke plows Naruto's ass. :P
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  • From LadyRonin on September 17, 2007
    this is a cute story. i can't wait for sasuke to get in naruto's pants so here's my review. i cna't wait to see how sakura reacts once sasuke shows naruto what sex is.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 16, 2007
    SO far your story seems interesting but I hope you don't take this as a flame. I am not an English teacher and I know some of my mechanics aren't always on point but I get by. Well Basically I was wondering if you have a beta and if not would you like me to beta for you. I totally understand what you are getting at in your story but its a little confusing. Please don't be offended I like the story overall and I think its a very smexy idea. *runs off feeling bad now for pointing it out*
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  • From spoon10488 on September 16, 2007
    good story but you need to reread it to remove some of the spelling errors.
    =)
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