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Reviews for Un-happy Birthday

By : LindyStar
  • From ANON - apple on December 05, 2008
    Ahhhh!!!
    I liked this story. Very. Much.

    Update!!!!!!! PLEASE????
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  • From KFegari on November 25, 2007
    This is a really good start! I love the characterization of Kakashi and Iruka. I really like when the usually more submissive one in a relationship holds some sort of power over the other. ^_^ I know you're trying to get right down to it, but I would have liked to see what Kakashi is actually like around the other nin, Asuma and the others you mentioned.
    Well done!
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  • From ANON - Suz/lividangel on October 14, 2007
    I think it's a great beginning.
    I read it twice!

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  • From inediblefrogs on October 11, 2007
    Such a great first chapter- and I'm not a big KakaIru girl. At all. But I do love it when it's well done like this- With angst and character flaws. I especially love the passage about Iruka's eyes being the window to his soul, and Kakashi feeling as though he's been intrusive after looking into them. More please...
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  • From Limericks on October 11, 2007
    This is looking so good. I have very high hopes for this fanfic. I thought the writing was very well done and i hope to see more. Thanks:)
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on September 15, 2007
    I'd love an update.
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  • From MoveThemHands on September 15, 2007
    Ahhh!!!! You ended there? Damn that does make it kinda un-happy...is that really the ending?

    Anywho, I loved this one as well. Your ability to put Kakashi's emotions so out there and understandable was amazing! You could feel what he was feeling and almost made me blush thinking about looking into someone's eyes such as Irukas.

    Again great job! Later!
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