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Reviews for Flame

By : Rosebud
  • From ANON - Rennasakura on February 18, 2012
    Itachi timing is perfect... ahahha I think I know where that Flame come from
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  • From GoddessMU1313 on March 25, 2010
    Very nice! If there's one thing I like more than Sasuke getting his pride trampled on, it's Sasuke getting his pride trampled on... followed by incestual gay buttsecks. You have won my love, kind sirmadam.

    There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, I don't think I have any complaints... Though a continuation would be great. I'd love to know who sent the flame! (Maybe I'm just being dense, but I can't figure it out...)

    Again I say, nice work!
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  • From DarkStarrNinja on February 28, 2009
    Love it. You are one of my favorite authors on here!
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  • From Sinslayer on December 20, 2007
    interesting *hands out kunai shaped cookies*
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  • From ANON - AHH on November 20, 2007
    YOU ARE SO AMAZING the sex scene is a bit brutal I have to say, it made me wince. But cute plot ^^
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on October 28, 2007
    One question: who the hell flamed Sasuke to get that kind of animalistic rage?

    Xenobia
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  • From Octavia on October 27, 2007
    omfg
    that was the most retardist thing i've ever read
    JK JK JK!!!!!
    lol
    that was good
    it'd be cool if you added another chapter
    i'd very much like to read it
    :]
    but since you made it a one-shot i wont get my hopes up
    LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2007
    this. was. hot. (even if I have to admit that I really thought Red Jutsu was Itachi, but oh well^.^)

    are you sure you don't want to write new chapters? because I would be very happy if you did!

    bye
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  • From MissMayumi on September 18, 2007
    I love you. and the image of Itachi stuffing Sasuke's ass with his cock. Oh man.

    ♥
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  • From LJV on September 15, 2007
    Original idea^^ I love this fic!
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  • From kocoum on September 15, 2007
    have my baaabbbyyyy!!!! i know ya wanna ;)
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  • From ANON - Hikari on September 14, 2007
    Quite an original story is not it? The reviews suited the characters - though I would expect more coherent stuff from a girl with an intelligence Sakura is said to own. And in fact I would like to read more, for example with some excerpts from Sasuke's infamous story (honestly to always make a delay after the 9th chapter and his readers do not realise this circumstance yet...).

    Still, from your profile information I believe the "Redjutsu" nickname to hide Naruto, since it seems to be your OTP - the NarutoxSasuke relation, but honestly do you truly think Naruto would ever write that way? Even use words like "thesaurus", try to be psychologically critical and such?

    Instead I had to expect it to be Itachi himself to wield such a writing style. As a measure to brainwash/manipulate Sasuke somewhat... and in the end effect to alter the condition the "brotherly" relationship is in. For the flaws of the story are sure enough linked to the flaws of the author himself - in the end we write ourselfs to a degree, do not we? And Sasuke seems to have a problem in understanding a value of relationship and the true closeness... To make the boy insecure and in need of comfort would be a stage one, to make him rethink his wishes and values the second and probably get the remedy for both Sasuke and the relationship - the third. From this point of view I see Itachi to be the one acting behind the "flame" (also comparable to constructive criticism in this case), in fact he has gained some profit already. From this perspective I see a longer discussion between the brothers - the anonymous one online, the direct one in the "real life" to be held parallel and eventually the progress to be shown in both Sasuke's life and excerpts from the daring "online story"... Would not it be an interesting story to read?

    I believe I have tried my best to convince you into continue, ItaSasu and modify a few sentences from the chapter one. Anyway I wish you luck with this story.

    With regards, Hikari.
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 13, 2007
    hmm. this was interesting, and pretty good. i liked the idea of sasuke posting dirty stories. i do wonder who flamed him... but, oh well. great fic!~
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  • From ANON - Niiro_yuuyake on September 13, 2007
    This is awesome! I loved it! And that flame--it was perfect. I could so imagine reading one like that! lol.

    And the reviews were hilarious! I too use 'OMG' too much and the all famous 'XD'. lol.( I also use 'lol' too much). ^_^;

    Great story! I loved this one-shot!!!
    -niiro-chan
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 13, 2007
    Interesting
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