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Reviews for Best Laid Plans

By : inediblefrogs
  • From Aufie on April 27, 2008
    Absolutely fantastic, excellently written in every sense. Thank you!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 28, 2008
    Every time I read this series of stories I'm amazed at what a great writer you are... you create a complete storyline that's riveting, hot and interesting on so many levels!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 03, 2008
    I really liked this story. The storyline was awesome, the characters stayed in character very well, I really like your version of Ibiki. Thank you for a great story, please keep writing!
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  • From realityrelease on January 13, 2008
    really this was quite good and filled with subplots. well written :)
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  • From Hestia on November 24, 2007
    Well this was really clever--three sets of plans intersecting and a slutty Izumo added in. The structure of the story--the decision to gradually reveal the plans inside plans by the use of four points of view was really brilliant. The moment where Kakashi stands over Iruka with his mask off--wonderful! It's sort of funny how you solved the sorrow over Sasuke by Ibiki's vows. I, like others, wonder if the unusual absence of Naruto perhaps is because he is being saved for Sasuke, eh? Or Ibiki? Now that I'd love--once Ibiki gets some man ass, he can't get enough, and what better way to keep his vow than to keep Sasuke by his side all the time? Interestingly you didn't have Ibiki's "dislike" of man-sex linked to his torture, but that would be a logical reason, but perhaps too dark. I was half expecting Kakashi to have taped the damn thing again, but I'm glad that didn't happen. I really liked Kakashi's jealousy of the gentleness between Izumo and Iruka. Gosh, it makes me want to write an Izumo and Iruka story, but I'll just read on and see if I get more of those two in another story. Oh, I forgot to say how much I loved Shikamaru's little appearance--which nicely sets up for my favorite of your stories!
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  • From Hestia on November 24, 2007
    Wild! I got to process this one before I comment. More Later!
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  • From LindyStar on September 30, 2007
    Wowzers! I totally didn't see that ending coming!

    Poor Sasu-chan, Kakashi is going to break his heart into itsy bitsy pieces!

    And Kakashi getting well and truly screwed over! Priceless! See how you like it, to be used and tossed aside like a dirty diaper. And how Iruka doesn't have the time of day to give Kakashi in the end? In yo' face beyotch! And even Ibiki won't give him comfort sex...it's just u and ur hand tonight!

    Will Iruka have Kakashi now that he's had some of the kind of sweet lurve he's been craving? Will Ibiki have a sexual orientation crisis? Will Sasuke ever find love? (Will there be more hot mansecks?) Find out next time in 'All My Chuunin'
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  • From Travellyr on September 29, 2007
    beautiful. Just beautiful.

    Kakashi is not a genius, he was a prodigy. There is a difference. And I'm pleased that Iruka is happier, Kakashi has finally gotten two thoughts to rub together in that selfish head of his, and that Sasuke is apparently no longer going to be so tormented.

    Iruka and Izumo are part right: Ibiki is not a kind man, but he is a good man. He is a very good man.
    And like any good man, he does whatever he has to do.
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  • From Julissis on September 27, 2007
    Damn, Ibiki is good at his job. XD
    I think i mostly enjoyed his interaction with izumo, and the way that sweet chuunin always reacted exactly the way Ibiki wanted him to.
    And the intense wall fuck? ^^ fuck, that was hot. Even if it was Ibiki who did the fucking. ( i think i have a problem with him being involved in yaoi.. ^^´)
    Lol.. you make me use that one word far too often. XD
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  • From ANON - sara on September 25, 2007
    Ow, this chapter was so hot!
    I love blindfolded Iruka, That's so hot.
    Ibiki doing Kakashi on the dresser made me sweat. *nosebleeds all over*
    I liked the way you ended it. Kakashi shouldn't get what he wants all the time,
    It's good that he learned a lesson.
    I'm glad Sasuke has someone looking over him.
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Ebaka on September 24, 2007
    wow! what an ending!))) ibiki looking over sasuke in respect of shisui's memory...that's definitely an unexpected turn!) have i ever told you how much i love following the paths your imagination leads you...hmmm sounded stupid ^^...but, well, true...
    by the end of chapter 3 i really had no ideas what to expect, but i so love the way it all turned out...iruka and izumo falling asleep cuddlimg (i mean, no one can deny those two are the cuddling types XD), kakashi being totally cunfused and ibiki being the wise ass)))...i love how you did ibiki...the way he's psychologically manipulating the others to do things his way (even if it all hasn't gone his way exactly, he still got some nice *caugh* experience with kakashi XD)))
    i loved this fic...and i really can't wait to read more from you...no pressure from my shameless fangirl self, though))))
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  • From ANON - luxeflex on September 24, 2007
    ;_; so sad *hugs kakashi*

    thank you so much for updating! it was a great and hot chapter once again ^^
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  • From llyoung on September 24, 2007
    Wow. Chapter 4 was fantastic. I absolutely loved Ibiki's plan - Ibiki is a genius. Loved that Izumo and Iruka "made love" and that Ibiki and Kakashi fucked. And yeah Ibiki we believe you when you say that you don't "like men" (yeah right, just like I don't like men). Thanks for a wonderful story and hope to see more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - purplelev on September 24, 2007
    I just wanted to say how much I truly enjoy reading your stories. I mean aside from the obvious hotness (and they are incredibly HOT)they all emotion. I find my self laughing and sighnig during each story. I go from happy, sad and so many other emotions it's hard to cataglorize. I look forward to your next story. I am hoping for some Naruto and Sasuke which I think you may have hinted at and I can't wait to see what else you do with Shikamaru (my favorite) and Ibiki.,

    Thanks for sharing your writing
    purplelev
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on September 24, 2007
    Shikyaku – I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. I love Ibiki’s skillful manipulation of Kakashi’s ego and libido AND decision-making skills, love Iruka and Izumo’s sweet, tender lovemaking, love the way Ibiki insists, and insists, but gives in anyway, love the cuddly chuunin and… oh, fucking hell, the WALL. And the… free-swaying… Oh dear god. KILLING ME WITH THE MAN SEX.

    I adore how every plan but one backfired. Well, maybe two. ^_^ And the ending was beautiful, freaking perfect! I was trying to guess Ibiki’s plan through the whole thing, and I never would have guessed that. Surprising ending, but perfect.

    ^_^

    It’s great how so many people are indirectly involved in this fic, how the threads from your stories are twining together.

    Fuckverse rocks my world. I am really, REALLY looking forward to the next one.

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