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Reviews for Best Laid Plans

By : inediblefrogs
  • From ANON - Ebaka on September 10, 2007
    now...that totally helped me survive the lack of nicotine tonight))) this is such a positive fic, i loved the irony you put into it...the getting-drunk-and-feeling-all-friendly-and-stuff (special emphasis on the word "stuff") scenes were just hillarious...so real and funny at the same time))) i practically laughed my ass off reading the drunken-conversations part)))
    haha kakashi and ibiki came up with a really cruel plan, after all...or is there something else coming up?...can't wait to read what happens next..damn kakashi! i actually started drooling over izumoxiruka already/// but well, iruka also has to learn some things about freedome of choice in what concerns personal matters)))
    this is really great))) i love your writing so much))) always makes me smile like dumb...or almost cry like a retard)))
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  • From llyoung on September 10, 2007
    This story is so hot (and so interesting). Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From Julissis on September 10, 2007
    I nearly jumped.. lol GOD ... to end this chapter at such a moment... mean! XD

    So.. Kakashi and Ibiki are behind all this? hmmm
    Good idea to describe their grinding and kissing the way you wrote about it. It's different and refreshingly new. ^^ And very enjoyable.

    Does it make sense? no? Yes? ^ ^ ah, well. Doesn't matter really, mh? ^^
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  • From ANON - sara on September 10, 2007
    Argh! Cliffy!
    I love Iruka!!!! I bet he'd be really hot with Izumo.
    That was so hot when they were grinding their crotches *nosebleeds all over*
    I was hoping they'd go all the way but damn Kakashi had to show up!
    j/k, this is a really good fic so far, and I'm tense to find out what happens next!
    I've been readin your other fics but I haven't left a review yet o_o
    but I just wanted to leave a review this time to tell you I really like the story in this one,
    even if their not having sex yet.
    It's really interesting.
    Great chapter and I hope you update soon!
    sara
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  • From DuosAngel on September 10, 2007
    Oh no! Iruka didn't even make it to the next day without being found. And what is Kakashi going to say about Iruka and Izumo kissing? Will he be mad? Jealous? Turned on? Poor Iruka. He's going to have a hangover, regrets, and a failed plan in the morning.

    (About your invit to y!, I can't get into the site. It won't let me because I have spyware, or so it says. I'm missing out on such great art too!)
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on September 10, 2007
    SHIKYAKU. I'm never going to believe you again. Boring? Never! I love drunk-thinking Izumo and Iruka, arousing secrets, 'platonic' kisses, knowing that you shouldn't but DOING IT ANYWAY, all the things that it's okay for two pretty, pretty chuunin who are good friends to do to each other in the middle of the street(!), hands that just won't behave....

    Ibiki is so very Ibiki in this. ^_^ And I'm just going to imagine that Ibiki and Anko are up in his apartment getting it AWN.

    You know what else I love? The way you contrasted Kotetsu and Izumo's relationship with Kakashi and Iruka's, the way that Izumo didn't try to make Iruka feel bad that they were different ('We're all wired differently'), the fact that Iruka doesn't have any apparent bad feelings for Sasuke - in fact, I think I'm picking up some concern there, eh?, the fact that... okay, I'm not going to type it, because I know people sometimes look at reviews first.

    Say what you want to say, but... I'm hooked on this story. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 06, 2007
    *shakes head* I KNEW sooner or later Iruka was bound to hit his limits. NO one likes being taken for granted! *muses* SO when and what will be Kakashi's reaction when he do figure out Iruka's plan? *winces* But you do realize that plans like Iruka's might back-fire on him...At least Iruka's not planning on making Kakashi jealous...
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on September 05, 2007
    Yay! The Shikyaku that I know and love is BACK!

    I'm glad to see Iruka trying to take charge of his situation - it makes him seem like much less of a victim to Kakashi's... philandering ways (if you can even apply that word to man-on-man (-on-man-on-man...))

    His jealous knee-jerk reaction when Izumo touched him was great - well, not great like it made me happy, but great like it felt true to read in an uncomfortable sort of way. And oh, I do love a tipsy Iruka. ^_^ And how he felt the need to share his appreciation for Ibiki's friendship. And how Izumo got all happy when he heard Ibiki use dirty language.

    I'm not sure if I trust Ibiki... actually, I know I don't. But I guess I'll see if he's being shady with good intentions, or if he has planned a darker plan for Iruka. ^_^ And I'm wondering... who was in the trees?!?!?

    (I'm also wondering what Kakashi has on those tapes that are even private to him... heh, I'm missing the *drool* emoticon)

    Great chapter! I'm so curious where you're going to go with this!
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  • From Julissis on September 05, 2007
    Hmmmm?

    What's Ibiki up to? Is it going to help 'ruka in the end?
    Are you going to involve Ibiki in your konoha-swinger-society? XD (AND poor ruka..)
    And how much drinks did he have? I lost count..

    Such strange coincidences.. i'll just wait for the answers then. : )

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  • From DuosAngel on September 05, 2007
    Wow, only one chapter in and I'm desprete for more. What on earth is Ibiki doing though? Oh and do whatever you want with the characters, after all that's the whole point of fanfiction isn't it? As long as there's a semi happy end I've got no complaints. (Unless you write another fic later to make up for a sad ending.)
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  • From MikaSamu on September 04, 2007
    Ah, sneaky, clever, and delightful Ibiki. A terrific story.
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  • From llyoung on September 04, 2007
    Oh this is good. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
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