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Reviews for Cool Lips

By : FluffyLemons
  • From hisoka on September 07, 2007
    HE TRIPPED TWICE,THE KLUTZ,SASUKES...NICE WHYS THAT? DOES HE HAVE A HIDDEN MOTIVE OR IS HE JUST BEING KIND FOR SOME ODD REASON?AND NEJIS KINDA CREAPY .CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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  • From marquesgue1 on September 04, 2007
    Oooh I liked it!!! XD it's more than interesting and I can't wait for the next chp!!! neji was obviously surprised at the way Sasuke was acting so I can't wait to see why Sasuke allowed Naruto to leave - could it be just because he did find Naruto's excuse believable? Anyway - I think it was a good start!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From blueh on September 04, 2007
    I'd love to read more. Keep updating.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 04, 2007
    More please. That chapter was too short. Naruto sounds adorable. Can he sprout ears and a tail? Please update soon.
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  • From Hen on September 04, 2007
    Your vamp scenes are hot! Please continue.
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  • From spoon10488 on September 04, 2007
    Nice choice for a story. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Dramastarelf on September 03, 2007
    I didn't think it was boring just shortish. I like it though.
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  • From naruske on September 03, 2007
    i really liked it i can't wait for next chapie
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  • From nekoleopard on September 03, 2007
    it's good can't wait to see how it progresses update soon
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  • From LadyWolf on September 03, 2007
    Hey, you got my attention with this first chapter. Like you I posted my first fic a week or so ago and I hoped everyone liked it and they did!

    ;o) I can't wait until the next chapter, just keepin' comin'!!!!
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  • From noezel7 on September 03, 2007
    this sounds like it will be pretty cool. did you read the twlight series by any chance??
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  • From TseuTsumi on September 03, 2007
    Are you kidding? This is very interesting. I cant wait to see their relationship grow and see how things will progress.
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  • From sethian on September 03, 2007
    Great beginning! This story has *a lot* of potential! I hope you're going to update soon!

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  • From PaperPlanesCrash on September 03, 2007
    AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love itttt!!! Hahaha. Where'd you get the term 'sharing tongues? Possibly from a book...? about...cats....? If not, just ignore me. Hahaha, but seriously! UPDATE` SOON!!!!!!
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  • From Nanaka on September 03, 2007
    i love it so far... can't wait to read more
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