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Reviews for Feral Instincts

By : Trollmia
  • From EzriCandy on March 13, 2008
    *blushes and fans self* that was very...very hot! I loved this story, plain and simple. The fact that kyuubi was right there under the surface made it even hotter. I can so see that demon trying to find a way to 'pup' his sexy lil sensei *giggles*

    Great job!
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  • From promise2003 on March 10, 2008
    I was really digging the fic until the whole "Kakashi-tries-to-rape-Iruka" thing. Iruka might have been Naruto's most precious person, but Kakashi played a big role in his life and his training. Naruto looked up to Kakashi a lot, so he would be devastated if he ever caught Kakashi trying to do something like that. It would crush him. The way you portrayed it, Naruto nonchalantly brushed aside every aspect of the relationship that he had with Kakashi frivolously. Instantly, Kakashi was evil and evil only.

    I think if you would have taken the time to dig a little deeper with the emotions Naruto would have been feeling, it might have helped. Naruto seemed very superficial because of how he reacted, and Naruto is anything but superficial. Naruto's friends mean the world to him, and that means Kakashi too. It wasn't even what Kakashi did that was the problem (he was a bit OOC, but he's a screwed up guy, ex-ANBU, it might happen if your story has a dark take on him).

    It is so rare to find Naruto and Iruka stories, so I am glad that you are writing this. I guess what I'm asking is that you take your time, maybe slow down a bit, and develop the situation and inner feelings a little bit better. ^__^ Thanks.
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  • From Ryokitty on March 10, 2008
    Quite a nice story. Strange seeing Kakashi as the bad guy, though.
    There are a few slight grammar and spelling mistakes.. but that's okay. Those can be corrected easily.
    The only thing that bothered me, really... is in the fifth chapter you putting "k9's" instead of canines.
    Other than that, you had a very nice story. A bit short, but that's alright.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 10, 2008
    This fic was really good! I never thought I'd like Iruka/Naruto but you proved me wrong. There was relationship was very sweet yet sexy at the same time. Kudos ^_^
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  • From on January 21, 2008
    It was probably a good thing to let Iruka figure it out on his own without pushing him. It was nice of Naruto to give Iruka enough time to figure out his feelings for him. I am a little shocked though, he seemed to forwardly aggressive before. I will be looking forward to reading more!
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  • From on January 21, 2008
    Wow, I LIKE a protective possessive Naruto! Not many yaoi stories put Naruto in that character, actually I think this is the first one I've found. I really like what I've read!
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  • From serenagold on December 16, 2007
    haha, its like passing notes in class. ^^

    i hope Iruka took Tsunande's advice and stocked up on some lube. ;)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 15, 2007
    update
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  • From MysteryladyTx on November 11, 2007
    OH WOW, I LOVE this story so far, I can't wait to see more of this, it is GREAT!! But isn't what Naruto said a bit too close to what Kakashi said??? Maybe he's gonna freak Iruka out...but then again I mean Iruka does know Iruka ALOT better than Kakashi does...

    THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - AliaD on November 01, 2007
    Oh you have to update this. I didn't even think about this pairing as good until I saw this. I brushed off one story I read but saw this one. I'm loving how it's going and I'm happy Kakashi is getting some help. You have to know something is wrong when you call someone 'Prey'.

    AliaD

    Update REALLY REALLY soon.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on October 06, 2007
    Awesome story! I love naruto x iruka!
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  • From cynaga on October 03, 2007
    I like this story. I don't see Kakashi as a rapist though - it's a big stretch. But I understand it as a useful plot point.
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  • From FreaKyKinKy on October 02, 2007
    Kakashi! Noo! Why why must you be so cruel! >.< I lurve Kakashi. >.> I shall forgive this, just this once, since you are my favorit author.. But no more. Be nice to Kakashi. :(!
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  • From FairyNiamh on October 01, 2007
    Lovely update. I really like possessive!Naruto, and shy!Iruka. I am also glad that it was only an attempted rape and not full out rape. (I really do thank you from the bottom of my heart for that.) And to hear that mental!Kakashi will get help and punishment. *g* I look forward to the next update. Ja Ne.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 01, 2007
    Ohhh,
    I like it!!
    Please update soon.
    Slave
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