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From ANON - Zakunai on May 28, 2010
Hi,I checked the story out of curiosity, and I'm glad that I did. This story is awesome! I read your warning of no ukefied!Naruto and for a moment I imagined Naruto being as manly as Gai in school uniform :O I love how you describe Naruto and the gang's outings as well as Bro!Haku and Bro!Itachi : Sasuke seemed so tactless and insecure in this, but then your description of Fugaku made me understand of Sasuke's action more. Having this Fugaku as your father's really scary...
Anyway, are you going to continue this story? Because if not you might convert me to ship KimiSasu.
Thanks for writing.
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From ANON - Rst on November 29, 2009
Hi. Just wondering when you're going to update? I like your story and can't wait to find out how Sasuke deals with finding out that Haku is actually male. Also I think you hinted that Haku was nervous about a relapse. Can you explore his history a bit more? If you want to email me it's r.s.taylor@hotmail.co.uk

Thanks! x
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From venia on October 14, 2009
Wow! I knew your author's name wasn't new to me but couldn't remember if I had read something from you before...and then I found THIS story, the one that kept me glued on it for months, wondering how it could continue, the one that drove me crazy when I accidentally lost the file and searched everywhere to get it back. You also wrote this? *_* (and the ones on team7? Turns out I've read most of your works afteraal O.o)Your way of writing is amazing! No matter how much time it takes, I really hope for an update in this story(really, how dense is Sasuke not to notice Haku-is-a-boy clues on others' faces? XD) Congratulations again!
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From ANON - drawingwind on September 20, 2009
WOW! This is an amaaaazing story. I absolutely love how you write and how you develop the plot and characters. Its fantabulous!! I wonder how Sasuke is gonna find out about Haku and Naruto and how's he gonna react!? I really hope you'll be able to write more soon, since this reallyyy left me on the edge of my seat- for real ^-^

awesome awesome job!!!

~drawingwind
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From ANON - kate on May 09, 2009
hi,
it's great to see a story which deals with real-world transgender issues, and is sympathetic to ambiguities of genderqueer life that are completely erased by all those fics i've seen here, where the boys can turn themselves into perfectly passing, ridiculously feminine and sexualised women whenever they feel the need. as interesting as it is that so many people seem to be dreaming about gender difference, i'm disturbed at how they reinforce binaries by stealth, not to mention making me long for very silly, over the top choices.

and even better, your work is also well written, engaging and a pleasure to read!

i wish you much success, however you're measuring it, and wait for the next chapter so i can hopefully find out whether naruto manages to negotiate a relationship despite his secrets, if any of the girls actually turn out to have brains and stories, whether sasuke can be honest with his mother...
thanks,
kate
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From ANON - midoriko on April 05, 2009
Aaaaahhh! I don't know if you are still writing these wonderful stories, but PLEASE continue them! At first I thought, if Naruto's a girl, I will not like this... but I have come to really enjoy this story. You have written the characters very well. It's like 3am and I'm sleepy, but I had to let you know how much I like your stories. So please, keep up the awesomeness!
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From ANON - Moonmoore on January 22, 2009
You are killing me with the kimimaru and Sasuke action. I must be a masochist because I shouldn't be reading this or at least those parts. Although, I just skim them but I still get cramps an not the good kind. Right now, my stomach is doing crazy, painful, anguish filled somersaults. You did say that this is a Sasuke/Naruto pairing, right? Please, put me out of my misery! I beg you! I feel like I'm being tortured, slowly but surely.
My email is marqqui @ yahoo . com
Please be an angel assure me that this phase would be over soon and that Sasuke/Naruto pairing will prevail! I really need your confirmation even if I read it already. Is just that Sasuke looks too into Kimimaru and they are doing all kind of things and is really driving me nuts! Seriously, drop me some lines to let me know, okay? I kind of see the minor attraction that Sasuke has for Naruto but he just melts when Kimimaru is near or touches him that it looks so disparing. So please, write me and if you have a emailing list, add me.

Thanks for now!

Sincerely

Moonmoore
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From ANON - artduncan on November 10, 2008
I don't mean to push, and I know writers' black can suck if that's what's up, or real life, or whatever, but are you going to post another chapter? I'm really eager for it. I check this everyday and it's one of my homepage tabs so I don't have to keep pulling it up.
Yes, I'm an obsessive dork >_
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From ANON - a on November 04, 2008
I like your story. Please continue. I don't write stories but I read a lot of them and I really don't review because I just like to read.
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From ANON - JD01 on November 01, 2008
I really, really enjoyed this story. It is so different, so unique. I love Naruto and Sasuke's parallel internal debate with their identity. I really hope you intend on continuing it.

I wonder how Sasuke will react when he find out Haku isn't a girl- and oh! The possibilities for Naruto and Sasuke afterward! I am guessing Sasuke will assume Naruto, who he believes in a relationship with Haku, is gay. Will he start regarding him differently? Mhmmmm....
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From Houseki on September 08, 2008
Review Ch6:

So the beginning was a bit of a downer b/c of Uchiha-san being such an ASS! Gah! Why he can't let his kids be who they want to be is so unfair! Him practically disowning Itachi if he doesn't "straight"en up is awful! And poor Sasuke in the same boat but on the silent end of it... having to watch his bro go through this knowing *some day* it might happen to him. Although, from the way things are going.. looks to be the Uchiha clan *won't* die out even if the two sons are gay >.> lmao Which is odd for those who don't know Naruto! lol *cough* (wondering how far you will take this.. like, all the way? or just until everything comes together and everyone is happy? lol)

Sasuke's hunt for a girl was hilarious. Of course the girls would notice him looking at THEM! lmao Poor guy.. all those breasts and fluttering eyelashes directed at him! nfufufu He's *definitely* gay! hahaha Poor Kimi though hearing the news.. sounded a bit worried.. me wonders how he will take it when Sasuke leaves him for Naruto.. or will he leave Sasuke before he can hurt him? I wonder if Kimi might go for Haku.... all these things that could possibly happen and you need to write it so I can know for SURE!! lol

I like too that even they aren't ninjas in this fic, the group of friends are still very observant of everything around them.

Woot! Gaara!!! Can't wait for the party just so I can see Gaara!! (this sounds familiar from when I was watching the show the other night! lmao)

Gah! Poor Sasuke and him being COMPLETELY oblivious to Haku being a guy! And EVERYONE knows.. EVERYONE! lmao Except him *facepalm* And for Haku not to say exactly why... oi oi oi... everything is going to go very wrong in the next chapter, isn't it? lol

Nyahahaha Sasuke is realizing how yummeh Naruto is! Man, I can't wait to see how you reveal Naru's.. um, situation, to Sasuke! And how he takes it *facepalm* I hope for Naruto's sake, very well. heh And shame on Sasuke for listening in on Haku and Naruto! Now he's reeeaaaaaaaaaallly off on everything *sigh* Poor kid. In the dark. lol And then toss in a bit of Kimi/Sasu smut.. class dismissed! lol

But not before Neji confronts Sasuke... he's so malicious.. he now knows Sasuke is in the dark and he keeps him there! Someone show him the LIGHT!! nyayhahahahaha lordy! Alright. Now you MUST get the next one out soon! Onegai? *puppy eyes* teehee

ASHITERUUUUUU

Nic

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From Houseki on September 07, 2008
Review Ch5:

So this chap was pretty funny. I like how you have Itachi and his friend interact. They are rather amusing. And like I said earlier in my text that I think you must've sent this chap to me before you posted it way back when cuz I *so* remember the tat bit and I/S in the van :p It is really sweet of Itachi wanting to show off that he really is in it for the long haul with Sasori. And I think that really excited Sasori as well >.> lol

It was cute that Naruto was mad that Sasuke wasn't around even though he was the one who was out for two days straight the previous week. Just shows he misses him :p And Sai.. oh what he wishes he knew! He's spot on but on accident! lol I have yet to meet Sai in the anime/manga, but from what I have read of him thus far in fics, he seems a bit of an ass and there *is* something about him, lurking behind that smile... >.> lol

Sasuke's visit to the doctor was quite amusing. All over a sneeze! Which is so funny and I'm sure you were laughing when I was complaining about my sneezing b/c I hadn't read this yet! Cuz that was so me this last week! Gah! But today, or maybe yesterday, was my first sneeze-free day! I think all the pollens and whatever elses that were attached to me have finally dispersed :p YAY!!! So after all that, they send him home with benadryl.. quite funneh!

And you ARE hitting all that is taboo in this fic! lol Now, AIDS, and HIV? Whew! This is some heavy stuff dood, but you will make this really shine light in the positives and make people think, because people should! People are so biased about gays and stuff, and I'm glad you really pointed that out. Obviously, our younger generation is becoming less and less homophobic (as we can see with all our lovely fanfics!), but there are still some who just can't let it go... It also makes me wonder if they realize this isn't some new trend.. that Alexander the Great even had himself a male lover! Whatever. Do justice, yo, like I know you will! *Pumps fist into the air in admiration!* Oh and I applaud Ino for FINALLY saying something smart! Good for her for putting those girls in their place!

Ugh! I feel for Hinata... that is one of the classes I definitely kept pushing off while I was in college! Cuz I had to do it already while in high school, isn't that enough?! Blah! I don't stutter, I SPEED-TALK! I rush it all out and mumble and yeah, it sucks lmao... funnily enough though, now I'm a trainer and speak in front of a class alllllllll the time >.> me wonders if I did go back to college and took the class if I'd do better? >.> lol prolly not!

The part where everyone was vetoing everyone was funny. They do some seriously delinquent things! lol Ah well.. to be young again, I guess. And off to get tattoos! Woot! (I want another one! And you still need to get yours! And I need to get mine filled back in again *sigh* lol)

Seeing Sasuke and Naruto actually be against each other and how they go back and forth was really cute. Them playing baseball together and all.. I likes!

And naughty S/K in the back of Kimi's car! I wonder if Itachi knows they go there and was checking on them? Hmmmm? lol That can't be a sight to see, your lil bro spitting out someone's spunk from the back of their car out on the dirt road? yuck! How Itachi kept himself calm on that one... well, he *is* Itachi, so I guess that would just explain it heh :p

Alright! So that was for chap 5! Now on to Six's review! yosh!

So that means you KNOW you gotta up'd sooooooooon! Cuz I'm done and I need to STICK WITH IT to... STICK WITH IT!! lol

Love ya girl!

Nic
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From Houseki on September 07, 2008
Review Ch4:

�Hey�� the boy with brown hair in a high, spiky ponytail�who was currently the topic of insult�attempted to scowl at her, but only managed halfway before giving up on the effort and returning to his cloud-watching with a lazy shrug. It was true, after all. ~WOOOT!! My Shika-kun has arrived!!!!!! Yatta.. I love his lazy ass :P ~

�Tch, whatever, you don�t understand what it�s like to be stereotyped just because you�re a girl.� ~OUCH!~

~LOL Nice toss in of the Bleach characters... now where is Urahara!?!?! *drools* ~

�Hakkun� ~Bless you ......... >.> couldn't help mtyself :p ~

Chouji right beside him for moral and snacking support. ~Teehee~

~Haha enter: Faye! I actually like her... considering most female chars are rather annoying.~

(sneezing which he was nearly positive was only a sign of extreme gossip and impending doom, and had no actual physical reason) ~LoL There has to be a SNEEZE of DOOM in this fic =)) ~

Alright, I know it wasn't as much as my last ones, but I'm uber tired... but you know it was fantabulous! I liked seeing Naru with his friends and the bickering between him and Ino is quite funny. The bits with Itachi tossing Sasuke over his shoulders was adorable! I like GOOD Itachi ^__^ Yay!!

Ok, hopefully tomorrow I can finish the last two chaps! And.. then you better have the next one ready for me to read! haha

Love ya!
Nic
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From Houseki on September 07, 2008
Review Ch3:

"It�s not just the Prozac dosage she�s increased, she�s added three more psychotropic drugs to your regimen, another anti-depressant, a mood stabilizer, and an anti-psychotic!!" ~Bloody hell! That's a bit, especially for someone his age!~

�I know you�re awake,� he informed the blonde.

�No I�m not,� Naruto grumbled, squeezing his eyes tighter shut.

~FUNNEH!! lol I like that he "squeezes his eyes tighter shut". That just cracks me up more I think lol~

Sasuke scowled, showing his disdain for the sneeze, his brother, and his brother�s suggestion. ~Sasuke is a multi-disdainer >.>~

Hell, if Sasuke could figure out a way for Kimimaro not to know, and still be with him, he�d wish his boyfriend didn�t know either! ~hehe that just cracked me up!~

Down side streets and back streets on the west side, one could find factories and warehouses behind high chain link fences, the hub of the commercial railway (what was left of it), and the unofficial red light district. In mirrored directions on the east side, one would find mom and pop stores, clusters of several small neighborhoods, interconnected by a few common parks, two groceries, the butcher, the bakery, the diner, the community garden, or the local bars. On either side, one could find potholed streets, cracked sidewalks and crumbling curbs, with weeds growing through the cracks, graffiti, and a general state of disrepute and disrepair. Not to mention the abandoned houses, boarded up buildings, hidden rooms, dank basements, and back alleyways where any number of vulgar or illegal activities took place on a regular basis. ~ESTL much? lol~

~You did some serious description work on Oto.. did you draw out the town? Cuz you had everything in a precise place almost. Great work~

Haku left the building through the main entrance and began walking in the general direction he thought the midday clouds would best be viewed. ~This one sentence had me grinning ear to ear, for I *knew* which friend Haku was looking for! lol Enter: SHIKA!!! woot!!~

Itachi caught the bamboo utensils between his own, stopping their movement. �Don�t point,� he ordered in monotone. ~This just made me think how I wished my control and strength over the chopsticks I used would be able to do that.. but alas, b/c of my weird handling, I don't think that'll happen.. although, I will say, since the last time we had our chopstick discussion I have gotten MUCH better at eating with them! lol I ate a whole bowl of rice at Japfest with chopsticks.. that's talent! lol~

Asexual Ice Prince ~AHAHAHAHAHAHA.... love it ^__~ ~

Ahh... so is Itachi a "good" brother in this one? I hope so.. YOU know how much I liked Itachi... mainly before I even met him.. just saw that pretty face heh Ah well.. guess we'll see!!

So how was this for a review? hmmm?? lol

Lots of love! Next review: Coming Soon!

~Nic

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From Houseki on September 07, 2008
Review Ch2:

First off: LMAO @ you and jpop debating! Kawaii!!

Secondly: �And what�s wrong with smiling? You want me to scowl instead? I don�t know if that�s a good idea, Haku. It might anger the Ramen Gods, scowling at the Ramen Maiden.� Naruto closed his eyes and shook his head from side to side sagely.

Had me rolling! lol SO Naruto! Or Narumi :p

Also: It's really sad that Mist County is so prejudice against Haku and Naruto being the way they are. But that's life, rl or in fanfic. You have gone really deep with this one! Naru trying to control his body by working it overtime so it wouldn't develop. You've got a great mind, always thinking about the little things! Ugh, mind you, since I love you, I read the purging... blehhh! So nasty! I don't like to throw up, so having to read it was making my tummy upset. No more purging please!!!! lol There is no more, ne? Ne?!

Fourthly?: I *did* read the little citrusy goodness at the top, but you know me, I don't like forceful bj's so heh Although it was written very well.. made me feel for Sasuke. I loved the part where Sasuke cleaned his mouth out and dressed. Too funny. Has to be P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Although, Sasuke can never get away from having to live in his brother's shadow... one of us needs to do a fic where it's the other way around! lol And what did Sasuke forget to do?! dun Dun DUNNN! lol

Finally: ...there was a "Finally".. I just can't remember now.. I'm getting sleepy heh.. but let me think on it *thinks* ..oh, well I really like how Naruto and Haku get along. You write them well together. I like how things are shaping up! And I still got..4 more chaps to go?! Aiyaaa! All the things you could do to these characters by then! Must go now so I can read and then I shall be back with another review!

Much love,
Nic
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