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Reviews for To Hold

By : JBMcDragon
  • From CrisNoWait on November 29, 2008
    Oh my gosh!!!!!!!! You made me cry, I so wanted things to work out, somehow...I would do what Shino did, I would forgive but never forget, and I would never go back to a cheater!!! Boo Hoo! Please do another one, I love your stories, Shino/Kiba Kiba/Shino you are a great writer! *Runs to comment on Lj*
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  • From ANON - China Dolly on May 15, 2008
    I've now read your entire Kiba/Shino series and I will say I'm quite surprised at this ending!!
    I sooooo looked foreward to them to be happy together again. But then again, it does make sense in a way that they aren't...
    I just hope you are going to continue this further! I'm so curious as to what is going to happen next.
    Very well written, by the way. You have a very nice style of writing. I like it. So now I'm off to read some other works from you.
    - China Dolly
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    Darn.. This almost made me cry.. Love your stories btw.. ^^
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  • From on March 16, 2008
    it's a good story, sad as hell, but good.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 18, 2008
    I'm glad you didn't try to "make everything all right" in the end. Marriage is a cage, some people can not survive in it, no matter how much they love their "mate". In honesty if you stay true to the characters, like you have done so well, it could never work. Beautiful touching story. Thank you for posting it.
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  • From Lunarwench on December 30, 2007
    Hello! I just read all your Shino/Kiba stories, and though I normally shy away from sad endings, I really liked the whole series! It was very well written, great character development, and amazing sex scenes. You really are an amazing writer.

    I'm sorry to say I'm not going to be listing all my favorite parts, cause truthfully, there's too many of them. So I will only say, I loved it. All of it. And I won't beg for you to continue the series because I noticed that at the end of 'To Hold' you wrote "The End" and duh, I realize you didn't add that any of the other parts.

    So...Even though it's sad that Shino and Kiba won't be reunited, I accept it. Cause Kiba cheated, and I NEVER accept cheating. Maybe like a one-time thing during drunkeness, where the cheater runs to their partner right after, admitting his sin and begging forgiveness and dying a little on the inside. But the cheat-ee can only take them back if the cheater is sufficiently punished.

    Anyway, thank you for the wonderful story and all the others (of which I've read several) you wrote. Keep up the fantastic writing!
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  • From Villain on November 25, 2007

    This just breaks my heart. I've read it twice now, and the heartache doesn't lessen. That's a sign of compelling writing. : )

    I do hope it continues. This series is the only Shino/Kiba I've ever read (and probably ever will). Honestly, before I read your stories I'd never thought about them together... Anyway, amazing work. It's rare when fanfiction can merit this much emotion. Thanks!
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  • From xcrstfallenstrx on November 21, 2007
    Okay so today I read every single story in this series. I have to say... it's amazing. I had already read mark a long time ago on media miner, so I was intrigued. Once I started I couldn't stop. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Tanja on October 20, 2007
    I'm in tears and must ask, is this their ending?
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  • From Nickname on September 23, 2007
    I was not expecting that.

    I was in tears by the end of it, that was a really sad ending. Poor Shino! Although I can't exactly say the same for Kiba (no matter how much I love the guy). Please tell me this isn't the end! I have to have more! I have to know what happens!

    And as always, this was very well written. Kept my attention glued to the computer screen the entire time.

    Awaiting for more of your work, and hoping that this isn't the end,

    ~PenPal
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  • From cloudydayz on September 20, 2007
    So sad. So wonderfully written!! Please let there be more to their story.
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  • From NAnderson on August 24, 2007
    WHAT???? NO!!! NO Nonononononononono! HOw can u end it right there! I was so in love with this whole line of stories with this couple and now I want to go cry! PLEASE tell me ur doing another one and it wont end here! And sadly I must admit it was verry well writen...... I errr u.... and love u all the same....errrr
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  • From inediblefrogs on August 24, 2007
    I'm beside myself... This is my absolute favorite fanfiction series ever (and most of my other favorites are either your stories or stories by Meleth, Veletlunas, or HeyDiddleDiddle from your Hidden Village archive). I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw there was *new* jbmcdragon.

    Yes, this was incredibly sad- but this chapter *so* had to happen. I really don't see how anything else could possibly have happened next. This was so beautifully written- thank you for taking the time- and I'll keep my fingers crossed that more is coming. (oh- and I forgive Kiba... poor, trapped feeling Kiba...)
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  • From ANON - Fwa on August 23, 2007
    I've never reviewed a fic on this site but since I'm continually blown away with your work I couldn't help it. Haha. God I felt like I was experiencing the emotions of the characters themselves and ended up crying. That was realy difficult and painful to read. I'm sure everyone will be bugging you to continue and put them back together, which I have to admit I agree. Unfortunately it's your story and will go in the direction you take it. In which case I'd end up filling it under "Amazing but can't re-read last installation if not entire fic due to depression causing content" haha. My hat's been off to you ever since I read the Kakashi Mission which I still rave about to my friend for having the best characterization of Kakashi. Essentialy, you have amazing talent and loathe as I am to admit it since I'm way depressed and a romantic at heart To Hold was very well written.
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  • From ANON - <3 anon on August 23, 2007
    WHAT?!? That can't be the end of this awesome series... *Crying* This whole series was very well written; I read it from start to, I pray not completely, finish. You portrayed the personalities well, and I really enjoyed it. I was wondering about other characters' standpoints on this situation though- mainly Kiba's mom's. Any chance of there being a sequel someday? Or more fiction in general? I'll have to check in again to see if you have 'cause you write the best Shino/Kiba and Kakashi/Iruka fics!
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