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Reviews for Petals of a Sunflower that Shouldn't Bloom

By : LadyRonin
  • From kokiden on June 11, 2008
    Hey Lady Ronin!

    I enjoyed your prologue. There seem to be a lot of ideas and feelings behind it, something rare in fan-fiction! One thing I'd suggest is to emphasize that on first glance they appear only to be friends, on second glance a Hokage and his subordinate, but only by observing longer do you see that they are most likely lovers. That didn't quite come across as clearly as it deserved to! :)

    I wanted to respond to your comment on my story that I wrote with Kimya, "Save Me From the Dark." You can find out what happens with them by reading my multi-chapter story "Love's Ambition." "Save Me From the Dark" happens AFTER "Love's Ambition," but you'll find out a lot more about what happens with Sasuke & Naruto if you read it. It's mainly a kakairu story with another "secret" pairing and then a surprise pairing at the end LOL Love my surprise pairings! :D I hope you'll read the story! :) And thanks so much for your comment.

    Oh...if you want to respond to this, feel free to e-mail me at barbjo@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - :) on February 28, 2008
    lol was this a update , i feel like i already read this chapter hehe
    eitherway i still love the story your're writing
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  • From ANON - :) on February 27, 2008
    Im still here and thank you for updating :)
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  • From ANON - :) on December 21, 2007
    arggggggg....dialup computers arggggggg.

    thankyou for updating so fast


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  • From ANON - :) on December 20, 2007
    Im so happy your're back I was going through horrible withdraws without your updates!

    //An thankyou again for whiting such a great fanfic//:)

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  • From spoon10488 on December 20, 2007
    very cool story.
    =)
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on November 19, 2007
    I really like this story. I am guessing that Sasuke in the time that he is in right now, is the ANBU captain and he is just thinking back to all the times in the past? Or is he younger and before he became ANBU?

    I look forward to when Sasuke and Naruto have more interaction then seems at the moment. At least at the beginning of the story it seemed that they only had time to spend with each other while walking home from work.

    I know this is going to contain MPreg so I wonder will they get married as well?

    I am glad that Sasuke is seeing Naruto really is a smart man and not stupid like so many people like to make him out to be.

    Great story and I look forward to your next update. I look forward to knowing what is in the journals as well.
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  • From shirilyle on October 18, 2007
    great story so far plez continue
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  • From ANON - :) on October 18, 2007
    your fanfic if the only reason why i come back to "adultfanfiction"
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......... im so happy
    thankyou for writing it

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  • From solitare1 on October 18, 2007
    You have a great story started. I am really pleased with the direction you are taking it. Please continue and I like the songs you use also.
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  • From Snoopythebrave on October 18, 2007
    Ah the long awaited chapter ... it was as good as i hoped it would be.

    yeah getting to class on time is a bitch... and since i live on campus it is even harder cous i always think 'it is only 5 min away' so always end up leaving when class starts...

    as for my chapter ... it is about half way done i think but been swamped with work here at HK uni... never in my life have i had to do so much homework, but i will try and get it done as soon as possible, was going to put up a mailing list for my story since it takes time to get a chapter up but not much response so dropped the idea...

    well anyways hoping ur computer will be nice to u now, so that u can update a little more often (is this even a word, ah man my language skills sucks big time sometimes) and i am sending u all the ice cream and candy u wanting to fuel up on some energy.

    cant wait for the next chapter...

    big hugs snoopy
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  • From KitsuneFun on October 02, 2007
    I like your story, though to be honest, I would leave the flashbacks out... its just way to confusing in comparison to the rest of the story and I like where the story is going according to chapter 3... so I look forward to where your going with that. Also just curious, but will their be hints of something between the Yondaime and Fujaku? somehow I have a feeling their might be, but maybe thats just me *laughs* anyways looking forward to ch 4
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  • From ANON - :) on September 13, 2007
    your story just keeps getting better & better
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  • From Snoopythebrave on September 12, 2007
    yo

    yeah started the review and then my laptop when all haywhire on me so have to start again, it is less than 10 min until class starts so i have to cut this one short sorry. i know i could do this later but then i might forget.

    way to go on the story, it is really well written and one get caught in the flow as one reads. keep it coming oh yeah could u email me the italic thing to? cant remember who it was that mentioned something about it but since it doesnt take word it would be nice to know if one could get italic here. hehe

    well better go so i'll see you around for the next chapter urs or min ;D

    hugs snoopy
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on August 24, 2007
    This is a great story, but should chapter 3 really be so short?

    I look forward to the next update.
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