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By : inediblefrogs
  • From ANON - Dragon77 on August 25, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From llyoung on August 25, 2007
    That was absoutely yummy. I love the way you write. All your stories are
    just fantastic. Very few stories (so far only yours and Hestia's) can send
    me off into "la la land" where I just sit around and have a goofy smile on my
    face for a few hours and think of how wonderful the chapter I read was. Thanks
    for writing.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 25, 2007
    It's me again. :) What I wouldn't give to be in any of their places. Except for Sasuke - that poor thing is probably about to explode by now! This story is so incredibley hot! MOAR MOAR MOAR! I hope you get more inspiration soon. Please don't leave us hanging!
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  • From DuosAngel on August 25, 2007
    Yay! The build up in this is so sweet! And I know I won't be disappointed in the end result! (You're right, that SaixSasuke pic was tasty.)
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  • From kakashizgirl on August 25, 2007
    WHAT!? Finish it up in one more chapter!? Write 20 more chapters of it! It's the hottest fic I've EVER read, seriously! OMG ~ I want to F**K all of them! How do you do it? So graphic and perfectly written, so well described. I feel like I am RIGHT THERE. Awesome smut! I love the way Kakashi is in control of everything. And having Sai put his half shirt back on and the gloves...oh GOD! the f**king gloves. I need to go change my underwear again. I LOVE YOU!!!! You ROCK SOOOOO HARD!!!! *glomps and tries not to get you wet in the process*
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  • From ANON - Ebaka on August 21, 2007
    so now the peeping tom yamato also gets to participate in the action))) haha that dirty talking could make anyone lose control over even the most professionally mastered will power...XD)))
    kakashi and sasuke suit each other greatly here...both being really cruel...i laughed hard when kakashi made clear he was going to suck sai instead of sasuke))) yeah, it made sasuke suffer, didn't...at frst i didn't really understand why sasuke was referring to iruka all the time, but well, seems the cold-hearted uchiha's feeling jealous))) and kakashi's getting angry about that...boy, those two have quite a twisted relationship...
    i also like that kakashi doesn't show his face to anyone in your fics...i wonder if you will make him take the mask off for someone eventually?...haha that was the romantic me, goddamnit)))
    and now the perverted me wants more smut! yeah, bring it on!!! XD)))
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 21, 2007
    God, this was fukken hot. Want MOAR. MOAR. Moar.

    I really want to see Sai ride Yamato's cock. MOAR. You are dman good at this.
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  • From kakashizgirl on August 20, 2007
    Wait just a minute. *heart pounding, breathing heavy, goes to change her underwear*. OMg! THAT was probably the hottest f***ing story I have read yet. I know that KAKASASU are entirely too hot together, but I have been dying to read Kakashi x Sasuke with another player. I freakin' LOVE the way you stay so true to character. Especially with Sasuke. That (hot) icy bastard~! I really really loved reading this, seriously, it left me breathless. I hope you plan on writing some more like this. Kakashi is my all time favorite fictional character. I've lulled myself into an artificial reality that Naruto is real. I'm a Naruto freak ~ thank God I'm not alone.
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  • From ANON - danielle on August 19, 2007
    Aaaaaaaargh fuck write more soon pleasepleaseplease.
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  • From DuosAngel on August 19, 2007
    I don't think this is getting to shinobi's gone wild. Hell this was a left turn away from getting angsty. But do whatever. As long as Yamato fucks Sai I'm happy.
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  • From Julissis on August 19, 2007
    Oooh... shikyaku..

    I forgot to drink my coffee while reading this.. Now i'm all hot and the coffee's cold. oO lol
    Now's one of those moments in which i'm kind of frustrated by not bein able to express my feelings in english.
    Or.. not able to exactly describe what i want to say... the words won't come.
    I really need more practice, writing english. Hmmm... i could review your fanfictions in german either.. *hehehe*
    Nono.. won't do that. It would feel like cheating.

    I'm glad you left the mystery of kakashis masked face. ^^ It made the whole situation much more realistic.
    Oh.. and tenzou.. did he really think no one of his fellow shinobis (!) didn't notice him waking up, getting hard and then stroking himself while watching? Maybe he was just too busy not being noticed. XD
    And i LOVE Kakashi all rough and dominating... and out of breath... and talking dirty.. and.. any way possible. XD

    Okay, enough. Thank you again for sharing. ^^

    Yuki


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  • From BrucesGirl on August 18, 2007
    Ne! Gah! So so hot!

    >.> I'm so speechless, I've resorted to one-lining. Damn me.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on August 18, 2007
    You're killing me... you're freaking killing me. I can barely type...

    Ho, Lee shit. Did I tell you I really like the way you write Sai? Orally fixated, penis-obsessed, strangely aloof, and sexy-as-hell. Guh. And Tenzou too, though I'm not all that familiar with his character. Love how he was still so respectful of Kakashi's privacy by not looking at his face, and the way he approved of Sasuke finally accepting his submissive role struck me as prim and old-fashioned in the midst of all of those goings-on, and it was perfect. ^_^

    I almost died when Kakashi pushed Sasuke up against the wall. Died. I had to read that part like five times in a row. Grr. The way they interact is almost uncomfortable to read, but not in a bad way - there's tension there that sexual release won't touch, and it's freaking hot. I don't know what you're talking about when you say PWP, buddy. And... Sai - licking Sasuke's cock - when Sasuke was riding Kakashi - sakjljfslka I shorted out.

    Great great great great! I'm sure I'll be reading this again, later. ^_____^
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  • From BrucesGirl on August 17, 2007
    Geeze. How do you do it? Every time you write smut, I'm on the edge of my seat, albeit rather stuck to it. XD

    This is an awesome piece. I love the tension, and of course, Yamato... God... Yamato Kakashi.... Hooooooooooooowttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.....
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on August 17, 2007
    I love you.

    This is just the first chapter, and I'm already squirming. I just absolutely love cocksucking Sai, demanding Sasuke, perving Kakashi, and uncomfortable, fighting-his-urges Tenzou. Kakashi's seeming fascination with Sasuke (and Sasuke's fascination right back)is a little creepy, and a lot of HOT. I love the things Tenzou tries to do to stop thinking about the sexual goings-on happening all around him. Ha, and he thought Kakashi would give Sai good, clean, wholesome advice...

    There are so many things I like about this, I just can't remember them all. ^_^ ...sexual intent! That concept is so hilarious to me. And God, when Sasuke said "Ssensssei..." at the end, my knees got all weak. Whew. I'm wondering how much more it's going to take to get Tenzou out of his bedroll. ^_^ We know he's more than a little interested in Sai, not to mention his idol Kakashi ('the gift of joining Kakashi's team... I loved how you phrased that!) no matter how far in denial he is.

    I just really, really adore this. There is so much sexual tension building, building, and I can't wait to see it explode. ^_^
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