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By : inediblefrogs

From ANON - 7787 on September 08, 2007
I just read yaoi-is-my-antidrug's story, and then I came over here to read yours. Wow - this is so hot and things make a little more sense now. I'm going to have to start at the beginning, though. I was wishing there was more Kakashi in A New Feeling, and now I read this one, and there's a lot of Kakashi! Wow, this is one of the hottest things I've ever read. I liked all the different relatonships, and how complicated it was. I liked how Sasuke told Sai it was okay at the end, even though it was a little sad. This was a great story and I bookmarked your page so I could read the reast later!
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From Julissis on September 05, 2007
Heh.. haven't reviewd your latest chapters.. why's that? I don't know.
I thought alot about it, but didn't actually act upon it.
This could really be described as "shikyakus fuckverse" XD You've got your very own unique writing style.
I really love those moments, when our rutting shinobis reach their orgasmic peak.. and the way you describe those primal needs and movements and pushing.. and pulsing, fucking, sw... eh, i'm drifting off. ^^�

You know we love your stories. : )

And:

mia, or gia or whatever it was: "fuck off."
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From ANON - anon food on September 02, 2007
Beyond lovely smut, your take on the Naruto-verse over several parts and its relationships/interactions is interestingly multi-dimensional. As seen with Sasuke and the Yamato-Sai pair, while relationships may not necessarily have to follow standard formulas and boundaries, making any type work can be more complex. At least that's how I see what you've done, whether purposeful or not. Of course, I may be thinking to hard...

Well, I do like that there are different takes and pov. You juggle them nicely, and I enjoy that everything doesn't end satisfactorily for everyone [though that might be sadistically wrong..hmm].

Again, looking forward to the next part. Hoping it might answer some more of my questions, like what happens next for Sasuke and Kakashi? What about Sai? What have Iruka [really am just darn curious with this one and anticipating his story] and the others been up to? and so forth. 'Til then...
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From ANON - gia on August 30, 2007
While I liked the story a lot because the smut was incredibly well-written, I couldn't help but feel cold and disappointed because you left Sasuke out in the cold. So instead of feeling satisfied of reading a nice pwp, right now I am mostly pissed off by the way you treated my favourite character, i.e. treated him like a rag. That and your supposed dirty talk is far too clinical to actually be taken as dirty talk.

It's your story, you decide what to do, but I doubt I'd come back and read other fiction written by you, not when you made me feel cheated that I spent almost an hour reading a fic that ultimately left me disappointed.
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From Kagenoshi on August 30, 2007
*MAJOR NOSEBLEED* Man, do all your stories have to do this to me?? *Falls over dead from Bloodloss* X.X
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From yaoiismyantidrug on August 29, 2007
(Hokay. I'm going to try this again... last time I hit the review button, it took me to the '15 minutes of downtime' screen, and my review was lost. ^^)

Holy hell, Shikyaku, I don't know why you were doubting this story. There's so much good stuff going on, meaningful interaction on so many levels, and it's touching, and intriguing, and fucking hot all at the same time.

Sasuke and Sai? You already showed me (yes, YOU showed me, not Kishimoto... 347 didn't phase me until I read YOUR SasukexSai ^_^) that they were sexy together, but now there's more depth there, and surprising sweetness. In these later chapters, when he's interacting with Sasuke, Sai seems so very human (which is difficult to do, I've found out.^_^)

Ohhhh... now I understand what you mean when you said 'a clothes thing'. I love Tenzou's clothing fetish... really there is something terribly sexy about half-gloves, half-shirts, masks. *shivers* XD Tenzou stole Kakashi's discarded mask... that made me happy.

Kakashi's control over the situation was wonderful. It was great how Sasuke was the only one who even questioned his fuck commands, but even though he questioned them, he still obeyed them.

And Tenzou... oh Tenzou, you old-fashioned thing you, unable to hold fast to your respected sempai's views on multi-partner fun... God, I love teasing, and I just completely melted at the way he got Sai to commit to him.

Eh... I can't remember what else I wrote before. I'm sure I'll remember and tell you later. Just know that I LOVE THIS FIC, I love Shikyaku's Fuck-verse, and I can't wait to see what you do next! ^_^
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From ANON - The Dragon on August 29, 2007
I feel so sad for Sasuke. The fic was wonderful, fantastically hot and all that, but him crying alone at the end made me want to cry too. Are you planning to write anything more in this sort of story-line? Something on the relationship between Kakashi, Iruka, and Sasuke would be great, just to see if things can work out for them all. ;)
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From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2007
awww you meanie i totally cried
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From ANON - anonymous on August 28, 2007
Whoa so hot! I like your "fucktastical" style. Your moresomes are yummy, and very well written! It was so sexy, the way Kakashi and Tenzo mirrored Sasuke and Sai, and then Tenzo and Sai mirrored Kakashi and Sasuke! Gawd, so hoooot.

Great job!
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From llyoung on August 27, 2007
"The next story won't be so graphically real-time fucktastical- I promise." But I like fucktastical.........Actually I just love the way you write everything. I like Yamato and Sai together and I feel sorry for Sasuke and I'm looking foward to your next story. Thanks for writing.
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From ANON - Ebaka on August 27, 2007
Shikyaku...what are you doing to me? you've almost gotten the reasonable and cynical me to cry together with sasuke right now (i did feel my chest tightening, that's for sure)...such a complicated, twisted and cruel relationship...sasuke really is an unlucky guy(((
but i'm glad tenzou found exclusivity with sai through this multi-player game...that attack of posessiveness was beautiful, though the traces of it could be seen from the very beginning...even though, they actually had spectators (which i think didn't really pay too much attention to them), their fucking (sorry, can't call that "lovemaking" XD) was still very intimate...hmm nothing compared to what kakashi and sasuke were doing...
damn! i feel so sorry for sasuke i think, i'm going to slide down into narutoxsasuke XD))) naruto seems like a right guy who would take care of sasuke despite all his weirdness, insecurities and sufferings))) ahhh *runs away to cry in some private place* XD)))

you did a beautiful job!))) the porn was breathtakingly hot and the emotions you put there were so deep...but i'm sad the story's over already...
hmmm can't wait for what comes next :D)))
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From ANON - Ebaka on August 27, 2007
yes, people! XD))) enough talking - down to the fucking))) damn, Shikyaku, you killed me with that chapter, honestly! thank you so much for giving me the link))) i'm sitting in the middle of the univerity computer class looking like a crazy hormone-driven teenager who has just seen a flash of panties XD))) drooling over that hotness...wow, tenzou licking kakashi's tongue through the febric, then kakashi rimming tenzou...oooofff...how do you expect me to study important things and eventually save the world, when my brains get totally preoccupied by your ninjaporn...*drool*...and don't you ever have those depressing thoughts about not continuing this tastiness again!...god, i already can't wait to read the next chapter)))
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From tovah on August 27, 2007
That maybe the hottest thing I have ever read. The smeyness in this story could no doubt give people nosebleeds.
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From DuosAngel on August 27, 2007
Wah! I loved it! Perfect in all ways! But I'm kinda sad for Sasuke and Iruka. Now I know you plan on making Iruka happy but what about Sasuke?
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From ANON - anon food on August 26, 2007
When I got to the end and Yamato had to give a final reason, I kept expecting the last line to be "Iruka". From Exclusivity, he seems relegated to the little miss left at home. With all of his attempts at keeping some morals in the bunch, I was hoping that Yamato would have remembered Iruka even if he doesn't actually say it aloud. I'm curious as to what Kakashi's reaction would have been at that moment and how things might have developed (or not as the case may be). Looking forward to seeing how all of this turns out, what other interesting things come up, and what pov you take next.
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