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Reviews for Illusions That Break

By : suiryoka
  • From ANON - animelover on September 03, 2007
    This is a neat story but a little creepy. I mean, if someone brought my parents back to life, I'd been screaming myself silly. Then there's the question of how Sasuke will react after his family "leaves" him again. It makes me sad to think about it, but maybe he and Naruto will be close enough that he'll be ok. Please let that be the case! And did Naruto really remove the murderous intent from Itachi? How are Itachi and Dad getting along, and is Sasuke getting the attention from Dad he didn't get before? So many questions, so little time. See ya!
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on September 03, 2007
    So after a couple months, Sasuke is going to lose his family again.

    I was thinking about it once I was done the chapter and I thought, Naruto would never let that happen...he already feels guilty and it hasn't even happen yet. And then I thinking, what if Naruto makes a deal with the death guy god (the one where the fourth Hokage *hehehe I was about to say his real name, lol* made a deal with to seal Kyuubi within Naruto). I was like, what if Naruto uses his life source to keep Sasuke family alive. It is 3:30 in the morning and last night I only had like less then four hours a sleep and I'm sick, so I have crazy ideas right now, lol.
    Well I can't wait until the next chapter. You got me hook on this
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  • From Picspixie on September 03, 2007
    wow i really love this idea, i can't wait to see how things progress, please please update soon i almost cried seeing the 'tbc' thing :( lol
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  • From anapana83 on September 02, 2007
    This sound very interesting so far. I'm very intrigued. Good job.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 02, 2007
    I love the story plot! Very original! So Sasuke wants to date Naruto but Naruto doesn't realize it yet? :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2007
    The story is so hypnotic. Please continue!!
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  • From ChaoticSpecter on September 02, 2007
    Great start. I've never read a fic with this particular premise and I'm very interested in seeing how your story develops. Looking forward to more.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 17, 2007
    Interesting story so far! Hope to see some more of the story soon! :)
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  • From akume on August 17, 2007
    Interesting storyline. I do hope you add another chapter. I'd like to see how this story progresses. Until then. Ja.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2007
    That was a very interesting chaper. Please continue!!
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