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By : BishounenKrazed
  • From asm613 on December 04, 2008
    Chapter 4's 'cockfight' was the juvenile kind of stupid-funny that I get a big laugh out of. First the incredulous misinterpretation of the subject and then the physical comedy in the acting out of the 'cockfight'_so simple and yet so funny. The previous 3 chapters were all amusing in their own original ways. You do a great job with the humor. I didn't quite understand the need for the last sentence in chapter 4-it left me with the impression that Sasuke left Naruto angry, instead of laughing at the absurdity of the situation. I've read so many of your stories over the last couple of days. Very original and unique ideas/thoughts/plots/concepts. Covering a wide range of states of mind and emotions and situations. I am glad to have the opportunity to read and enjoy the stories you share with us_Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Mikayla on April 24, 2008
    OMG this was great. "sasuke's dead"lol. is naruto really that much of an idiot that he dosent kn what a cockfight is? u really had someone yell "KILL PPL?" thats great. I love ur fics.
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  • From LindyStar on January 28, 2008
    And Sasuke did, in fact, welcome him, with open arms and open legs. Really open legs. Extremely open legs, with a hand wrapped around a straining erection, moving fluidly over the well-lubed length, eyes closed, toes curled, teeth biting erotically into a full, bottom lip, a purr rumbling deep within a pale neck begging to be mauled.


    Dear God~ that paragraph was so good! Very very good. Orgasmically good.
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  • From Imagy on January 18, 2008
    Sasuke's dead!
    OH MY GAWD
    I luve your stuff
    I really do
    never stop writting
    ...
    please
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  • From Adi on October 14, 2007
    second giggle:

    I so wasn't expecting that! I LOVED all Naruto's declartions, so damn cute


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  • From animeaddict666 on September 24, 2007
    These are highly amusing. I love the corny punchlines!
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  • From DHH on September 18, 2007
    Are you EVER going to finish or even STATE the discontinue of 'Memories of the Future??'

    If you quit, state it, so, readers would know..Jeez!!!
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  • From FallenSeraphim on September 16, 2007
    To be honest I thought chapter 3 with the line 'sasuke's dead' had me in a fit, i laughed for about 5 mins straight and then the odd random chuckle, i also enjoyed reading the other chapters as well and cant wait to see what else will be written.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 10, 2007
    "poor people live here" "3rd world countries" ouch, that's a slap in the face.
    very funny!
    update!
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  • From ANON - Shia on September 10, 2007
    Kyaaa... xDDD That made me laugh!! And the smut was very, very good... >_>
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  • From ANON - Taylor on September 10, 2007
    That was just great.
    AMAZING job. I'm so glad to have found this. It was hilarious. KEep up the good work.

    twistedneko@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Taylor on September 10, 2007
    WTF!?
    THAT WAS AS FUNNY AS THE REST OF 'EM!
    Cockfights...that's was great. XD
    Keep up the good work!
    twistedneko@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Taylor on September 10, 2007
    Oh, that was great.
    It's hilarious that masturbater sounds like mass debater.
    XD

    twistedneko@yahoo.com
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  • From Adi on September 10, 2007
    Oh god *dies* I've just read the first one, and now have to rush away, but I wanted to let you know that "We're out of ramen" killed me dead. My death in on your conscience!!!!!! WILL COME BACK FOR MORE!
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  • From crazychemgeek on September 10, 2007
    Another awesome chapter, I love how Sasuke got so caught up in describing to Naruto that he forgot about the game. Once again you've brightened my day :)
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