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By : ringpop
  • From YamiKaeko on August 21, 2007
    *Pulls out Flamethrower* FLAME TIME!!! Hehe just kidding love. Some people don't know a good story when they see one hahaha! Keep up with the smexy goodness ja!
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  • From UzumakiLover on August 21, 2007
    Damn, flamers will always be flamers. Anyway I enjoyed this so far, you should keeping writing it, its very good. Don't worry about mindless sea-monkeys and you just keep doing what you, without a doubt, do best.
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  • From ANON - The update monster on August 21, 2007
    Lol flames, do the flamers not realize that flames make our appetites for yaoi grow stronger? As for your story, I have read plotless fics, yours is not plotless. It's just not plot centric. Which isn't a bad thing. Your update speed pleases the update monster. But I demand more! Feed me!
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  • From spoon10488 on August 21, 2007
    sweet chapter. can't wait for the next.
    =)
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  • From despairs on August 21, 2007
    Hey don't let the idiot flamer get ya down babe (ha, right as if they really could) theres still plenty of us here that love ya! Oh hell yea
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  • From ANON - Ano Ny Mous on August 20, 2007
    What is this? You've made Naruto and Sasuke into Stues. Oh, so Sasuke was fat when he was a kid? Trying to pull the ugly duckling card? Poor Sasuke only has Naruto as his one -true- friend, and as a result falls deeply and madly in love with the blonde... And look what you did to Naruto! What, it's not bad enough that he's an orphan living in foster care, no he also has to be raped!? Please. In your later chapters, you don't even show that it has had any effect on Naruto at all. It's a fucking traumatic experience being raped! At this point in the story, the whole thing is absolutely pointless! And what was the point behind Itachi not telling anyone that they were moving away/back? Oh, that's right, there wasn't one. The pairing is so horribly overused and cliche that I want to gouge my eyes out with sporks whenever I see the words SasuNaru. You may like the pairing, yes, but I would think that there are enough overly redundant SasuNaru fics out there that you shouldn't feel the need to pollute the fandom with more!

    One of the only good things I found about this was that your writing was actually mostly competent, though you shouldn't use fucking actions as replacement for dialogue.

    Get an imagination!

    ~ANM
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  • From LadyRonin on August 20, 2007
    i like this story. especially that cute chubby chibi-sasuke. i like the history that naruto and sasuke seem to have together. please tell me if this is a sasukexnaruto story. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on August 20, 2007
    Vivi: Hell yea. I'll so pimp out Venny if you update.

    Venny: O.o tha hell? YOU CAN'T PIMP ME OUT!!

    Vivi: Suuurrrrr, you keep telling yourself that.

    Venny:....Fuckin' Vivi, and her thinking she owns me

    Vivi: Cause I do.

    Venny: ANYWAY! Um, plot....plot...plot

    Vivi: Okay. The person who yelled was Sakura right?

    Venny: Dur, either her or Ino. But I would like it to Sai. Then he can go in there, and try and get some. XD

    Vivi: He doesn't have to try. You'd give it to him for free. Kay, so if its Sakura or Ino. You could have Naruto get out the shower (after Sasuke almost makes him stay) then answer the door. So their talking.....Well, Ino, and Sakura are yelling, and Naruto trying to get a word in. Then Sasuke can sneak behind Naruto (since Naruto only stuck his head out of the door) and pull down his boxers, and give him the best rim job EVA!!!

    Venny:....Dude, can I be in your story? I just wanna fuck Sai. He is so sexy.

    Vivi: Down boy. -sprays water on him-

    Venny: -starts to dance in the water- Don't you wish ya boyfriend was hott like me, don't ya wish ya boyfriend was a freak like me!!

    Vivi:..Oh gawd. It so wrong, but so funny. -keeps spraying Venny-

    Ja ne,

    ~Vivi & Venny

    P.S: Hope tis idea helps!!
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  • From Lihrah on August 20, 2007
    What. The. FUCK. Bitch?!

    Where the HELL have you been?? You weren't on MSN all weekend! And then I come to AFF, and see you've retitled this and YY and what else? Grr...and I had some more ideas I wanted to talk to you about.

    You have a serious kink for snowballing don't you? And SuiKiba. I'm so fucking glad to know a fellow perverted freak.

    Next time we're on MSn, remind me to tell you about the dream I had with Kiba in it. It really came out of nowhere, but I think it sort of kind of maybe fits this fic.

    And so...

    I love you, dahlin'
    ~Lihrah

    P.S: You are a sexy bitch.

    P.P.S: I friggin' hate the daily down time. Makes me want attack the creators of it with blunt sporks and baseball bats. Fear the rabid fangirls I say. Fear them.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on August 20, 2007
    Um ahem *coughs before she stuffs tissue in her nose* Cool story I liked it *coughs and blushes* can't wait to see the update. Been trying to wait till you had more chapters but I got impatient HEY UPDATE YOUR OTHER ONES TOOO!!! Is that Sakura at the door? Hmmmmm?
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  • From vegaqixi on August 20, 2007
    >.< OMG, You hafta update! Your story's amazing! Keeeeep going! Tell ya what, I'll recommend your story to sum pples!
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  • From ANON - KingCobra on August 20, 2007
    Holy crap. Nice chapter.

    Kiba... lol. What a jackass.

    And, holy crap, is that SAKURA banging on the door like that?!

    Please update soon.
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  • From Sugary on August 20, 2007
    I like it alot. the smut scene was HOT and i love Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. PLZ CONTINUE!
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  • From despairs on August 19, 2007
    Oh man...what a cliffhanger. Now i'm wondering who is outside the door yelling at Naruto.
    And whoa whoa whoaaaaa! Super nice lemon my friend, i like how you make Naruto hung in your stories wo0t lol.
    I'm jealous of Kiba..i'd love a front row seat watching my favorite couple kiss.
    Eh...i'm worried about the thing with Sakura tho...i hope she wont make trouble =(
    And i hope Itachi wont make them separate anymore..GAH! So much stress and its only been 3 chapters /:
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  • From hisoka on August 19, 2007
    wow, your good at describing things,so who was knocking?
    hope you updats just as fast if not sooner is better, dont forget up we can make your life hell and make you misrable(doughtable)
    amusion....amusement would work fine but makeing up words is even better, such a fantastical imagination
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