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Reviews for Falling For You

By : brook13baby13
  • From J-Chan2845 on February 19, 2014
    This story is delicious lol!!!! Omg I can't believe Ino shot the therapist that was quite a twist it had me screaming...Great ending...good job totally worth the 5 stars!!!!
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  • From ANON - PrincessMerleen on February 16, 2012
    That... Was really randome ending....
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  • From LadyWolf on January 20, 2009
    LOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! THAT BITCH HAD TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The ending is fucking hilarious!!!!!!!!

    That's why I never, ever give any one advice.....it could possibly backfire on you....?D
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  • From Ikippiki on December 04, 2008
    you got me there I thought she would want Naruto dead. You should be more careful with the grammar mistakes but overall I liked your story.
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  • From solitare1 on March 30, 2008
    FUNNY ENDING!! Great!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on March 29, 2008
    lmao yeah!! that was the best most unpredictable ending ever!! omg that just made my day XD thanks you for such a wonderful story
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 29, 2008
    wow, nice surprise ending there
    Sakura the therapist died....
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  • From charmpit on March 28, 2008
    Nice twist at the end there...made reading the story worth it.

    Sakura takes a bullet! Well, she had one coming didn't she?
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  • From ANON - Nicola258 on October 18, 2007
    Aw absolutely loving this fic!!! I was shocked at Ino's cousin but really really enjoying it!! Xxx
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  • From ANON - J.T on October 18, 2007
    Oh geeze! Just when I was starting to get into it... Update! Update!
    I want to know what happens next.
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  • From Windchild on October 17, 2007
    Aww! This chapter was kinda short. O.o Is Sasuke going to be a prick for the rest of his life??? Poor blondies...

    ~Wind
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  • From Dragon7 on October 17, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From naruske on September 16, 2007
    omg i love the storie i wanna nother chappie plzzzzzzzz

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  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on September 15, 2007
    OK, well I have a few things to say about your story.

    1. You really NEED a Beta reader to go through your story and fix many of your spelling and grammar mistakes, much of the mistakes make it a lot harder to read your story and actually get the idea you're trying to convey.
    2. You need to learn that dialogue (or just a conversation between the characters) is not a story, it's pretty much like you're writing a play and not a story. You need A LOT MORE DETAIL. Your story is slightly vague due to the fact that there is little detail.
    3. Overall I like your plot idea, with a little more detail your plot idea would come through a lot more. As a writer myself, I know that spelling and grammar can be a bitch... though I usually invest in a beta reader to go through my story so that most of my mistakes get taken care of. Just know that I'm not trying to be mean, this is just something you can take into consideration and may be use to improve your stories, since for everyone there's always room for improvement.
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  • From ANON - Was für ein Pech! on September 15, 2007
    "If I were gay"..I just love this song!XD

    I like your story,although the chapters are quite short.But Anyway I like the tone,keep writing!=)

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