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Reviews for Embracing Dreams

By : Arigatomina

From Satoshichan on April 18, 2011
Congrats! You have managed to scare me. I feel like writing something that invokes fear in anyone can be hard. The scene with Suigetsu just sucked me right in, well it would have if I wasn't already deep into your story haha. You have obviously put lots of work into this srory and it shows. Even the amount of characters is impressive. I hope you continue on with 'Embracing Dreams', I would like to read the whole thing. Keep up the good writing!
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From LoadedSmile on May 22, 2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. I HAVE BEEN DYING FOR ANOTHER ONE! I HAVE CHECKED ON HERE FOR OVER A MONTH NOW JUST FOR THIS STORY, I NEED MORE PLEASE. WHAT HAPPENS? WHERE IS ITACHI?
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From jgoodman on November 27, 2009
Love Embracing Dreams, please update soon
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From daughterofvirgo on October 04, 2009
This is a great story. I read a chapter every day (sometimes more than one if I had some free time; crazy schedule). I loved Kakashi and Iruka. I thought it was hilarious when Kakashi was going around asking everyone if it was okay if he had sex with Iruka! I love Naruto and Kyuubi in this story, too. And I love Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. Chapter 39 was awesome. The Never game was so much fun to read. The end with Sasuke hallucinating made me think I was hallucinating. It was so messed up. I really look forward to reading more so I really, REALLY hope you finish this. Anyway, keep up the amazing work.
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From ANON - Erin on August 31, 2009
Yay! I'm so glad you've started writing this story again. I love how you've expanded Naruto's talents to become more like his canon abilities. I love how you've slowly progressed his talents and explain how he's learning them. Poor Sasuke his childhood is beyond messed up. I can't wait to see what happens when Itachi shows up. Please keep writing I'd love to read more!
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From CrisNoWait on August 30, 2009
Chapter 39

HAHA!!!! I'm so sorry I didn't comment after reading on Friday U__u But I really love this chapter. I never heard of that game played that way. But it was nice for Shika to win and even better that he forced everyone to kiss and then dragged Neji out alone with him...*since Neji-kun never bottomed* lol!!!

And I got to tell you I am so loving Ino in this...she has such balls, even though she is a spoiled sport..Sasuke has grown so much since he first made his appearance and the little devil arguing with imaginary enemies is EXCELLENT!! Haha who would think that groping him would calm him so much...XD! I love Naru groping Sasu...I guess thats what Kakashi use to do...*snort-giggle*

I know I'm such a perv but I love the thought...Now don't think I'll let you forget that Iruka has YET to serve his penalty for losing...and the hot One-eye-bandit is suppose to give it to him...

Thanks for the great update I look forward to the next :DDDDDDD!!
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From CrisNoWait on August 12, 2009
Great update, I'm glad Iruka is so patient cause I needed the slower version too. lol Now, Sai, yes he annoys me with his confidence and conclusions about the mutants. I just hope Sasuke has a reason to kick his butt. >__< I wonder what Lee will do when he hears about Gai, and Iruka; I wish he could confront the over zealous *mentor*

Thanks for the great update, and yup will keep checking for more. *hugs*
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From CrisNoWait on August 09, 2009
Ha ha! boobs are great imo! Go Get that sexy jutsu right Naru! lol

Well lots happening here...How the heck did he under rate Naruto? Dam and like always Sasuke looks on top of them all. Poor Sakura, will she master tap into her strength? I hope she and the other kids change the future for the best. Even poor clueless Sai, he probably need to masturbate more than Lee. Wait Lee wasn't' in the room, I wonder what he will call Lee.

Great updates I love them and I'll stalk here for more updates....Love you!!!
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From CrisNoWait on August 09, 2009
FANS SELF!!!! oH THANKS GOD i BEEN UP ALL NIGHT TO READ THAT!!! XD!!!! Yeah

Thats great! Now I'm afraid for NaruxKyubi..dam dead not human underground! This story has everything, a sense of impending doom, dark personalties, death, smut *more romance than smut imo*, tons of humor..maybe dry humor but effing funny to me and I just love the subtle way you build romance...lol! I was so hoping Kaka would make head way with Iru it seems Iruka's on Naruto's time frame when it comes to his sex life. And I want to believe the Kakashi punished him a little for that as well as Kyubbi trying to think he has a chance in Hell in killing Itachi.

Now Naru/Kyubbi prowling I love it...Sasuke taught him this even if he knew it a little already Sasuke help Naru see the great advantage..Its surprising that Kyubbi didn't realize way before. Well its good cause now Kyubbi and prepare Naru for what's coming.

That HJ was just perfect. I am a puddle of goo, and Sasuke is getting softer w/Naruto I hope they both and deal with the new arrivals..w/o too much trouble.

Thanks for this on to next. .lol!
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From CrisNoWait on August 09, 2009
You know I cant shut up...o__O most of the time. Imagine me on aff and I hit the seldom used "home" link and what do I see..."Embracing Dreams" wow I think yeah its here too..."nosey" I check the link and think "I got new computer I guess I'll save this under my fav's" ~blink~ wth.. x@#$@!~%% MORE CHAPTERS!!! GAAAHHHAAA!!

Waaa WAaa...more here! DAmit I must read!
Love the race especially the "I'm not gay Kiba" I hope he gets w/a dude..just so Naru and rub in his gayness..lol And Sasuke jealous! I didn't see that coming Yeah I know Sasuke must like Naru since he's allowed him to do things. But gasp, I didn't realize he *really really* like him! XD That was great, I didn't even realize that was the reason he made Sakura get between Kiba and Naruto. I thought maybe it had something to do with Lee's energy annoying him, not jealousy. Nice one.

And nothing is sexier than Sasuke cooking! Nothing, well if he's cooking on top of Naruto..lol thats a close second. I love this chapter off to the next. ~glares at Aarin stingy author~ I'm a stalker, of course I'd find ya...*snickers*..
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From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 02, 2009
I couldn't figure out who those people were until their names were said, so it sorda distracted me. But I still liked the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I liked how Naruto made a Shadow Clone and doesn't understand how it works. And I want to know what happened the last time Iruka caged them and what happened when Kyuubi woke up the first time. So, many mysteries that can't be revealed at once.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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From ANON - Pointlessrant on January 06, 2009
Waa I love your story! You've done very well translating the Naruto characters into your story while still keeping their personalities. I especally love Naruto, the way you made his relationship to Kuubi is certainly creative and you can't help but love his personality ^^. Generally I'm a SasuNaru fan rather than a NaruSasu fan but I'll read anything as long as its well written. Uke Naruto tends to have his personality flattened anyways. But no need to rush the smut, their tentative relationship is really cute. I ran across this story this weekend and I couldn't stop reading... though it took a couple sittings, its long enough to be a novel ^^. I hope you plan on continuing it, I'll certainly keep an eye out for it. I can't wait for the truth or dare session, thats bound to be entertaining; and a new mutant being thrown into the mix... I'm going to guess Neji since the person knows Hinata. Though you did mention Gaara coming in at some point... You're a good writer, keep it up!
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From Leeana69 on November 21, 2008
I adore Kyuubi in this fic, he's so awesome. XD

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From Leeana69 on November 21, 2008
I adore this story. I like the mutant powers thing you've added in. ^-^
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From CrisNoWait on November 18, 2008
wow, this is great, I feel reading this here is more like being in a quiet place, w/o a lot of ppl bustling around. HaHa, and no emo-cons to distract my hungry urges.. I really like this update its like you brought us up to speed on where each of the main char, for now, are thinking/feeling. You made Hina very pathetic but great depiction of her Naru character, I like it, I actually felt exhausted with her diminutive demeanor. Sasuke and Naru talking great visual and sneaky funny ending.. BTW Naru left out the worst/best part of teenage truth or dare, kiss so-n-so on the mouth!!! Haha Thanks for the update.. I look forward to more..*off to spam Aarin for the heck of it*
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