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Reviews for It wasn´t meant to be

By : Yourangel
  • From Stacy on August 12, 2007
    ok, 2 things....
    1-- your story has a great plot but, there should be more detail about the who, what, where, and when.
    2-- please make your chapters longer.....your story is really good but your teasing all of us with the short chapters!!!!
    update soon!!
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on August 12, 2007
    lol. I was thinking, "oh shit. the Popo's are here! 5-0 5-0!" heehee.

    anyway, poor Naruto. he was taken hostage used to keep the other patrons at bay...and for pervo stuffs.

    please continue. with longer chapters please!
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  • From ANON - zuka on August 12, 2007
    oh wow cant wait to read more hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ai on August 12, 2007
    The only thing you are doing wrong with this fic is.....making it sooooo damn short!!!!>_< This fic is so original, I never read a fic like it lol and I love it so much right now, please do update okay!!
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  • From Rosebud on August 12, 2007
    Interesting start, I'd like to read more. I hope that you can update soon! ^^
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  • From Dramastarelf on August 11, 2007
    I like this a lot and it's so short I look forward to your next chapter
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on August 11, 2007
    oooh, I'm excited. Sasuke and Itachi as criminals? It's too cute! Is it too much to ask for some Uchihacest? just a teaspoon full.... My doctor prescribed it to me. "at least one teaspoon of Uchihacest everyday, three times a day," he said. I overdose, but don't tell him that. heehee. that might explain why I'm so addicted to it.

    but I digress. Naruto is so cute. I hope your next chapter is longer!
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  • From Stacy on August 11, 2007
    oh man that was so mean!!
    way to leave us hanging there!!
    your story has a great start and i can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - dragon04 on August 11, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. Can you make the chapter longer.
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