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Reviews for She Wasn't Prepared

By : ladygizarme
  • From ThunderGoddesKino on January 11, 2008
    Holy freaking crap on a stick, this was so far the BEST Sasuke x Hinata story I have read. I think this is just what I've been needing to find, and dear God you sure as hell made my night! I am going to sleep happy. (It was a good night to begin with already, but this story made it 5 times better)
    I really liked the old-fashioned war-style setting you had for them, it was such a lovely change of pace and I just adored the thought of Sasuke in a military uniform *he'd look so handsome, zomg *swoons* and Hinata in here simple but lovely dresses. I would also think Sasuke would find her beautiful because she is beautiful in her dark-colored, pale, quiet way, and also appreciate her personality because she's not like how most other girls are. I just loved everything, especially how though they were awkward at first, it wasn't bad, and they became comfortable around each other. I would think Sasuke would appreciate silence at first, and then after time him and his loved one could chat more and open up more. I also adored the thought of how he was so tender and slow with her, and his actions showed how much he loved her even though he never outright said it. The relationship progression was wonderfully done, and I gotta say I was damn near ready to cry thinking he wasn't going to come back home. I can only imagine Hinata's pain of waiting there wondering if he's going to come back or not. War settings are gruesome though, but the end was sweet enough to rot my teeth inside out, and I loved every bit of it. Tender kiss, eeeee!
    Okay, it's late, I should go to sleep. So to wrap it up, freaking wonderful story, love it, adding it to Recommend Reading. Thank you and have a good day or night ♥
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  • From OxygenPirate on August 14, 2007
    That was amazing! Your writing is beautiful!
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  • From Trollmia on August 11, 2007
    Ahhh, so wonderful. Truly beautiful story. It almost had me crying at the end. Through the smile I had of course. I liked it a lot. If I had a favorite-list here on AFF - this would be on it :)
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