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Reviews for The Gift

By : ladyicondraco
  • From Dreamfool on October 10, 2007
    This story has a lot of potential. I hope you continue.
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  • From spoon10488 on August 09, 2007
    This sounds great so far. I hope sasuke likes his gift.
    =)
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  • From ShagTag on August 09, 2007
    Hmm, it's pretty good-a little room for improvement, but good all the same.
    It was a bit short, but the story line definately has it's intruiging(sp?) points.
    A more definate age of Naruto and Sasuke would be great-but a suggestion (take it or leave it it's your fic) don't make themyounger than 16-it's kinda weird. Generally 17 is the golden age, but hey-it's your fic you decide.

    But anyway, Ciao for now.
    Can't wait for thenext chappie.

    the Crimson Eagle.
    --better known as Orgy-of-Death
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  • From LadyRonin on August 09, 2007
    i have to say thatkabuto gave sasuke one hell of a gift. think about it he had naruto for two days (hiding him form oochimaru) and then the planning that went into capturing him i have to wonder why. does he like sasuke is he doing it to get sasuke in trouble with oochimaru. i like it so far though so i can't wait to see how it turns out.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 08, 2007
    Well it sounds good so far!! :)
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  • From trystkinkou on August 08, 2007
    Mmmmeeewwwwwwww!!!!!!!! Dang it! You just had to give me a teaser. *pouts* I actually like the promise this ficcy shows and would really like to see just HOW Sasuke uses his time witht he blond. (lol) Please add more to it soon. ^_^
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  • From EternalAutumn77 on August 08, 2007
    Looking good so far =)
    I cant wait to see more.
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