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Reviews for Corybantic Dance

By : fantards
  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2010
    Aww love it! Lol had rather amusing imagery with this chap, can't wait for more!
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  • From Julissis on November 23, 2007
    Okay, i have no idea, why i wrote "chapter 13" this morning. : ) That would be awesome though. *heh*

    gomen
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  • From Julissis on November 23, 2007
    Oy Ladies XD

    I printed and read chapter 13 in bed yesterday. So my review comes today instead of yesterday.
    I'm also wondering what happend to genma, though i kinda enjoy seeing him in that state. He's a tough guy. Hell, he even enjoys his own pain. XD (That part was hot... really..)
    Good thing, the kid will be back at tech. But we saw that coming, didn't we? Though, you made his decision very plausible. You two really have a talent for writing realism.

    I didn't mention that before, but i really like your original characters. (Riza and Hayas father) You two did a great job at characterization. If that's even the right word. ^^´

    K sorry for spelling things wrong. : ) you know..

    Julis
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on November 22, 2007
    OMG what happened to Genma. I love this story. I was so happy to see a new chapter. Now I want more. Hell I always want more of this story.
    great work I hope we find out who hurt Genma next chapter.
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on October 28, 2007
    omg more more more I was so happy to see another chapter I love your story.
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  • From Julissis on October 28, 2007
    You make me so happy. ^^

    First i was surprised that hayate took ankos kiss so calmly.. then i had to stop reading for a moment when genma showed up in the green room. And then, after a few minutes of .. calming down.. XD i continued reading. I love the interaction between those friends. And expecially when it comes to genma and raidou. (well.. YOUR gen and rai) I could read on and on about their relationship, and i mean their friendship, not anything explicit.
    Now i'm really curious if hyate's about to show up the next day, and if he'll be talking to gen or not.

    Well, anyway... thank to you two. : ) I love reading cd.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on October 18, 2007
    I liked this chapter. I made sure to read it a few times before I commented though. What I liked about it is how it feels real. Like I'm back in school trying to puzzle out the upperclassmen myself. Or even my girlfriends and what the hell was up their ass this week. I feel for Hayate, people aren't always transparent even in HS. Shit, most of them probably don't even know why their doing some things themselves.

    On the other hand Genma has got some case. The slow seduction is sooo not his style, or even in his experience. It must be tough to hold back but not stop entirely. The twins ans Aoba are really great friends.

    Great writing too.

    cdk
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  • From ladygizarme on October 03, 2007
    wow, i can't believe this has so few reviews! i mean, i guess maybe less people are drawn because of the non-narusasu-whatever-ness... but this story is really good! and so are the pairings!! i'm really enjoying it, and it gives the old high school au a new flavor, which is nice cuz i'm a sucker for that setting, however overdone it may be...

    and i'm really loving the genma/hayate-ness here, which is SAYING something for me, especially since it's the first fic i've ever cared to read with them as the main characters. hayate especially has drawn me into the story. i'm extremely curious about what's going on with him and about his background--and genma's as well! what happened to him and the others before? and what's up with hayate's sickness and his mom?

    i seriously wish i had time to review every chapter after i read it. unfortunately i don't, but i at least wanted to say: this fic is awesome, keep it up!
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  • From Julissis on October 02, 2007
    Wow... i gave it a try.. and i read it the whole day till now.. XD
    And now.. i want to continue reading, but there isn't more.. that's kinda sad. ^^
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  • From cdkobasiuk on October 02, 2007
    YAY! New chapter. Ok, Anko is a sadist. Poor Hayate ain't used to having friends, too cute. Poor Genma is gonna start drinking full time if Hayate has no interest in anything. Maybe they just haven't dropped yet, ya know. I'm worried about Rai, at his age he should of figured out what he likes and how to get it by now. Great description of the bag retrieval. I could feel Genma's muscle strain.

    cdk
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  • From Kerrisa on September 19, 2007
    This is the first bit of fiction i'm reading by you (you guys?) =O And i must say after after the first paragraph i was already in love with your(you..guys? lol i'm just gonna adress one person but i'm referring to everyone, since i think i read in the first chp something about there being more then one person involved with the production of this fic) writing style xD I normally only read NaruSasuNaru type pairings in this fandom, but i wanted something different today and chanced upon your fic! Lucky!!! You made Genma flamboyantly gay!!!And it works!! lol that bit you wrote about RuPaul in the first chapter, lol amazing. This fic is really fun to read! i've only got up to chp 4 but i didn't want to head off to class ( gyah i gotta go in 4 mins >__< just look at how he talks!! Such .. pretty language! Lol but i like how he's a proud whore, i can only hope that in the chapters i've yet to read that he gets some sexin!
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  • From Jayderaven on August 11, 2007
    I usually hate high school AU's but who could say no to Genma nad the gang? This really brings back those highschool theater techie moments ::wipes away tear:: I really like when you guys write stories that aren't just PWP. This is good! I can't wait to find out more about Genma's past and just what's going on with Hayate.
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