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Reviews for Best Plans to get Laid

By : theblueblue
  • From KingOfIdiots on September 17, 2008
    I gotta say that at times, you remind me of Mojo-jojo. you say one thing, then say it again, then say it again wording it differently each time. This makes some of the denser parts of the story boring, and takes alot away from it.

    other than that this is a great story, and i look forward to the chapters too come.
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  • From on December 27, 2007
    nice. cool. love hinata/naruto their a great couple!!
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  • From Peaceguy on November 11, 2007
    cool
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  • From edelta88 on September 03, 2007
    baaaaa cliffy. good story though, more plot to it then most of the stuff out there.
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  • From gaarafan64 on August 12, 2007
    put out the next chapter please this is just well heh funny and good nice plotline i have to say the 'any thing prize' was funny as hell hes just rubbing the back of his head thinking the whole image is full of humor thank you for this it really brightened a otherwise very very bad day ^_^
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  • From swartzvald on August 08, 2007
    this is good! looking forward to more
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  • From fangirlqueen on August 08, 2007
    I really love how Ino and Sakura wanted to bang Naruto but im glad they realised Hinata needs him more then they do. I kinda wonder what Naruto wanted as a prize and what took Ino so long? Please update soon i love this story!
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  • From 1upmushroom on August 07, 2007
    This is like vengeance and pie, 'So good' >:)
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  • From roxnroll on August 07, 2007
    cool. please update
    rox
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  • From Platinumsabr on August 07, 2007
    LOL, great chapter! Nice fight scene, some of it could have been explained better, but overall it was still great for those of us with terribly active imaginations (I wonder...lol). I think it would have been awesome if Naruto would have been trying to say "I'd like you to hook me up with Hinata" or something like that, when Ino cut him off by using her mind transfer technique, that would have been freaking hilarious, and if Ino can read memories and stuff like that while using that technique, imagine how stupid she would feel!! LOL, oh well, I can't wait for your next chapter and thank you for addressing me like you did in your chapter, I appreciate that. 'Till next time!
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  • From serenagold on August 06, 2007
    oh this plan is not going to go over well at all!!! neither mice, men nor fox demons will probably stand for this.

    >:) heheh
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  • From supadm on August 06, 2007
    Awesome...Naru/Hina rocks, and this looks like it is shaping up to become an awesome fic.

    Keep up the good work.

    Supreme Admiral of the Web
    AFF.NET Commanding
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  • From Platinumsabr on August 06, 2007
    Mwuahahahaha!!! LOL! Love it so far, good job. Good characterization, especially with Hinata. Keep it up! This has to be my favorite pairing of all time and I see lotsof potential in your story! Keep it up! (Go cliche moments!!)
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  • From BouncyBunny on August 06, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahahahaha...ha...heh...hehe...hehehehahahahahAHAHAHAHAHA!

    This is gonna be...brutally, brutally hilarious.
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