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Reviews for Forest of Demons

By : SpinalShiver
  • From OrochiGreel on March 27, 2008
    i want to read more lemons between Naruto and the wolf demon, so hurry up and update!
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  • From Hen on August 06, 2007
    This story is not very well-written. You are being way too technical and straightforward when you talk about sexual things. It ends up being very UNsexy. Also you need more dialoge, and it would help if you gave us insight into what the characters are thinking
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  • From hisoka on August 05, 2007
    wow sakuras life musta sucked
    updates
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  • From Bookworm51485 on August 05, 2007
    Whole lotta things wrong with this story. But the first would be, where's kyuubi in all of this? I can't see that he'd stand by and let all this happen without a fight. Even Naruto wouldn't just give in without a fight. Second, where the hell did the other demon come from and why was he allowed to 'play' with with the wolf demon's new toy? Especially to take Naruto's 'virginity'. It's absurd.
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  • From NeonXUltrahh on August 05, 2007
    that was disguisting and sick and thats all i have to say
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  • From StarlitKnight on August 05, 2007
    OMG That's soooo hot. Please update soon, I have to know what happens next.
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  • From plaawlod on August 05, 2007
    so what happened to Kyuubi? Wouldn't he be a fox demon of some sort? I like it! Continue Soon!
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  • From noezel7 on August 04, 2007
    Ok this was totally gross. I mean I'm all for male/male but you made it sick. The stuff where Naruto transforms into some kind of hermaphrodite/antro thing was the final straw. Really, try to put a little more class into the stories you right, for the sake of the rest of us.
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  • From Stacy on August 04, 2007
    uhh.........no!
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