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Reviews for To My Lovely Pulsation of Mine Core Being

By : Devra
  • From Spaz666 on January 05, 2009
    You evil writer.. You just keep teasing us readers without really giving us anything real to go on! That's just tooo EVIL!!!!!!
    Seriously though, it is good. entertaining, mysterious, creepy, but the chapters are too short for my tastes. That goes back to the evil comment...
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  • From LovePsycho on June 26, 2008
    Oh...possesive...-giggles- Get on with it! I want to see more of this...-brings out video camera- Cupcakes for you!
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  • From Hen on August 10, 2007
    That's good stuff. I personally thought it was Ita/Naru (which I prefer to Sasu/Naru).
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  • From Chria on August 04, 2007
    Please continue this. I love the sound of madness this expresses. I suggest reading it out loud like I did because it sounds 10x more seductive and sensual. Much love~
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 03, 2007
    man! is that uchiha is obsessed or what?! (hopes that its itachi. that would be so hot! *crosses fingers*) i eagerly look foward to your next update. oh! and can you tell us when this scene occurs because at the end of "the letter" naru was goig on a trip with iruka and kakashi and i would like to know how much time has passed since then.
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  • From LadyRonin on August 03, 2007
    nice begining to your story. will it be a mpreg since sasuke (you know it's him) is talking about starting their clan. how is sasuke following naruto around everywhere anyway. how is it that no has seen him (unless he has not been doing it long). shouldn't naruto be able to sense or even smell (since he is merging with kuubyi) that sasuke was in his house. anyway i can't wait to see wher your story leads.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    Wow! Great first chapter! Please continue!!!
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  • From kati on August 03, 2007
    OMFG YOU SOOOOOOOOOO HAVE TO UPDATE!!!! This is awesome and I love Itanaru esp when itachi is like this physco-dude and treats naruto like a wee pet and its all 'this is too weird!' and 'awww.,..so cute!!' *stops to take take breath*okayokayokay i'll calm down but only if you update!!
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  • From ShagTag on August 03, 2007
    Well, first off-great first chap-albeit short but I can deal.
    So anyways, normally I don't like first person P.O.V's but I thought that you really stayed in character (which I'm assuming is Itachi-because Sasuke isn't that...odd-if I'm wrong then I'll smack myself for being a hopeless case.) and I liked the obsession, not many people write really creppy and obsessive fics anymore. Anyways, I'll try and keep up with your story, can't wait for more.

    the Crimson Eagle
    --better known as Orgy-of-Death.
    d[-.-]b
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    u should write moore it sounds good
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  • From despairs on August 03, 2007
    Oh this is really good..i cant wait to read more! :D
    Dont know why but the possessiveness is a turn on lol.
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