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Reviews for Loving the wrong brother...

By : CrystalValderyan
  • From bloodshound on September 10, 2010
    ahahaha. falls ova laughing
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  • From Jomai on January 14, 2008
    I love it, it was so nice!!!
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  • From ANON - Ana on August 10, 2007
    This was amazing and the epilogue was hilarious. ^.~
    ~Ana~
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  • From YamiKaeko on August 06, 2007
    oh I loved it!!! This was your first fic online? It was great! A little adivce though, if you use Word you can catch your mistakes easier, if you don't I recondmend a Beta. Keep on writing such delicious stories. Ja!
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  • From loopdiz on August 02, 2007
    ~*~*Very SEXXXXY!!!!!!!I luuuv ItaNaru^^GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!~*~*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    H O T
    Yay, I really enjoyed your story.
    Hm, your characters acted authentic (although Itachi is pretty much caring...)
    and your writingstyle is great (flowing, funny).
    I especially liked the scenes, when Naruto did his "fish stunt" *laugh*
    I can imagine this scene so well ^^
    But there's one little thing I have to "criticize":
    It's a big plot you used for your story (one night stand becoming relationship, Sasuke's
    reaction...). It may would have been better to expand the story a little bit more (not only one shot).
    Hmm, we in Germany say :"In der Kürze liegt die Würze" (= Brevity is the soul of wit)
    so this isn't a real critic point.
    Nevertheless, this was a great story and differs very much from 90 % of the stories on aff.net.
    It wasn't only sex, there was plot ^^

    So I really hope that you will bring up more stories and of course update soon.
    And one little request: longer sex scenes = PERVERT ^^'''''
    Bakuma

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  • From Rosebud on August 02, 2007
    Awesome, I loved it!
    Itachi and Naruto are perfect for each other, and this story was sooooo good! I hope to read more from you in the future! XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    i abso love this story it is the best i've seen in a while...and better then anything i have written...for now?
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  • From ShizukaKawa on August 02, 2007
    That was very beautiful! I will surly dream about the story tonight! Er..I mean..Heh! ^ ^;; This story really lifted my spirits because I had a really bad stomach flu, so..Thank you!
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  • From blueh on August 02, 2007
    Aww... So sweet. Wow. You actually made Itachi... so understanding and caring. I really like it. ^^,
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  • From hpn827 on August 02, 2007
    Thank you (x3). I loved it.
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  • From despairs on August 01, 2007
    Ah very good story..lots of humor to be had and the lemons were yummy heehee.
    ItaNaru is my second favorite pair :D They are sooo hot together.

    Oh i love what Sai done with Naruto's éclair....LMFAO!! What a naughty boy he is.
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