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Reviews for Your Wish Is My Command

By : nayru
  • From ANON - Christina on August 16, 2007
    wow, your story is amazing, very well written. i am expecting a third chapter soon. please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anise on August 15, 2007
    So nice to see you posting another story I always like what you have to write and this is no different! I have to admit at first that I was so mad at Kakashi for taking advantage of the situation but then when you had him work threw everything and realize what he was doing, it turned out really great :)
    I also like that you had Raidou as the past love, it's nice to see people try something different not just the same exes over and over, although I'm a little torn because actally i love the idea of rai/iru as a couple so I don't want Raidou to be a bad guy. I also think it's cute how Kakashi seems to be the one who's unsure, it's usually Iruka that's the shy hesitant one. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how he progresses through the jutsu and I can't wait to read more ^_^
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  • From ANON - lo on August 15, 2007
    That was really sweet. I like this story, the whole plot is a great idea.
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  • From ANON - lo on August 01, 2007
    That was very interesting. A few wording and grammatical issues but oaver all not bad.
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  • From KansouAme on August 01, 2007
    Excellent Kakashi x Iruka story. Kakashi's reactions are just priceless. I can't wait to see what you do with it from here.
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  • From ANON - chibicherryblossum on August 01, 2007
    this is the best!! I cant wait to read more of it
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  • From dilemmalicious on August 01, 2007
    Aaaaah... I loved this when I read it first on the KakaIru lj community. Not only is it well-written, but the idea is fresh and clever. We need more jutsu accidents! I liked your Kakashi. He's written just lovely. So hum-hum but curious, reluctantly dutiful, all manipulative bastardy then overwrought with the guilts. Great fun. It's interesting to see Iruka so vacant, a null person defined only by the thoughts and reflections of others. Looking forward to seeing how you bring him around into the real world again. (oh, and for the NC17 stuff as well. Can't forget that. *grin* Take your time, I love build-up of words and characters you've got going on!)

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  • From ANON - Fanlover on August 01, 2007
    Hi! I loved the story! :D
    Even my big sister loved it, and she was the one to find it. I really hope you will continue the story. :D
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  • From fangirlqueen on August 01, 2007
    Oh come on i need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • From tovah on August 01, 2007
    That was so good I can't wait for more. Iruka with no inhibition could be really fun. I cant wait for the next chapter please update as soon as possible.
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