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Reviews for Your Wish Is My Command

By : nayru
  • From ANON - Enbi-sama on September 18, 2007
    T - T

    Poor Iruka-sensei... he's not getting any D8
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on September 04, 2007
    you know even if you take a while to update your chapters are so long who can complain? I love it Raidou redemed himself in my eyes. If it wasn't me i got a little suspicious when Kakashi was talking to Obito and his sensei, iruka was close and he used the word want a lot...the something happened to him? Am i reading to much into this or will it come back? either way wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed it
    ps. don't mind my spelling please.
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  • From ANON - teddybomber on September 03, 2007
    I lurve your story. My heart just melts a little more on each chapter. It's the most kawaii(cute) story ever. Thank you so much for updating it really made my day to see your story there. Can't wait to read more! Please if it's not too much trouble could you email me when you have updated? I would just die of happiness. Thankies again for a great story. It really just makes me smile and warms my heart. Luv~teddybomber ^_^
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  • From nawatia on September 02, 2007
    I really like the Raidou you decided to go with. Sad for his choices, but it shows what a good person he is. Iruka is simple and sweet, Kakashi is earnest and angsty and sweet. I am looking forward to how you will evolve the story. I was thinking, wouldn't it be sweet (cough***hot***cough)if Iruka had to initiate a sexual encounter...had to explain everything he wa- oops, needed to Kakashi... ...

    OK, I'm back - and you are probably already have the plot for the next chapter. Can't wait to read it!

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  • From ANON - Anise on September 02, 2007
    I'm so glad that Raidou isn't going to be a horrible guy plus I think your right about this giving them a much better history, I just like him too much and now I feel a bad that he doesn't have anyone.
    I can't believe Tsunade would do that but at the same time I can understand, it's a legitimate concern although I don't think she has to be so harsh about it! Poor Kakashi, all sad and heartbreaking but at least now it he knows that Iruka is making the decision himself, not because Kakashi wants him to, it's also nice to see Raidou in on the plans. I thought Iruka was utterly adorable just showing up, being so proud of himself for being 'super-sneaky' I loved that. Another great chapter, it's nice to see you updating again ^_^
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  • From fangirlqueen on September 02, 2007
    awww kakashi and iruka are so kawaii ^_^
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  • From ALD on September 02, 2007
    Great chapter. Not sure what you had planned before concerning Raido, but I like how you wrote it. Although when I first read that he was taking care of Iruka, I was a bit nervous; glad to see he turned out to be a good guy-and I feel sorry for him. Tsunade pissed me off though, it was great to see Iruka take the initive to sneak out and see Kakashi. I do get this feeling that something bad is going to happen before our couple finally lives happily ever after, it just seems that everything is coming together too smoothly too early. Can't wait to see what happens next, hope real life let's you update soon. :)
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  • From DuosAngel on September 02, 2007
    I wanna know who all is in the Iruka Protection Brigade too. Oh but Tsunade's gonna be pissed when she hears about Iruka sneaking away to Kakashi. Hopefully she won't find out until the jutsu wears off. I like Raidou's reasoning like this, it makes sense and he doesn't become a total jerk (and now he can be an ally).
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  • From nawatia on August 27, 2007
    Just read the chapters again - still like it and still looking forward to the next chapter. I get the warm fuzzies each time I read this story.
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  • From ANON - anon on August 22, 2007
    This is so cute! They're relationship is progressing so nicely!... so much so that i'm really afraid that this is just the calm before the storm. ^_^ This was really well written, and definitely one of my favorites. I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
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  • From nawatia on August 19, 2007
    Oh my goodness! I love your story!!! I wasn't sure at first when I read the summary, but once I got past the part where Kakashi realized what he did was wrong, my heart was just captured! I love the long chapters and am hoping you update quickly. I apologize for the nudge, but I really can't wait to read the rest of the story. I agree that telling Iruka to have sex would have been rape, those kind of stories just make me sad. your's is so touching and sweet, with just the right amount of intimacy.

    If you have an email list to alert readers of new chapters, please put me on the list!
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  • From ALD on August 19, 2007
    I get back from a two week vacation w/no internet, and find a new story posted by you. I really like this one and the plot, very original. There are little elements in the story that I really enjoyed, like Pakkun making an apperance. I also like how hesitant Kakashi is. I don't think I've read a story where he starts out not knowing if he's into guys, his confusion and growing feels for Iruka are very cute. Iruka is very well written also and I like that he's the aggressor in this, even if it is in a shy little manner. Hope this is another mulit-chapter fic b/c I'm really looking forward to see where this is going. Update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Tiff on August 18, 2007
    I love this story its so fuckin cute! XD
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  • From pantherrose on August 17, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this fic. Wonderful story and this Iruka is so cute! I also love the interaction between the characters. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - bloempot on August 16, 2007
    this fic is great ^^ I read that doujinshi and I agree with you, I really like this version much better
    your writing style is really nice to read if you know what I mean.
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