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Reviews for Midnight's Moon

By : spoon10488
  • From ANON - Ivy on February 23, 2008
    This chapter was so touching! Sasuke should have Naruto because he obviously cares and understands him alot. Your story is really good =)
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  • From lexjamandme on February 23, 2008
    Oh my goodness! Poor Naruto. And I loved the avenger Kakashi. This chapter had me all over the place. Laughing because of the drool monster and nearly dying because I forgot to breathe through the hospital conversation and then Sasuke understanding Naruto's 'snapping' episodes... almost immediately.
    Oh and when they were all wrapped up together... awww...
    And now Kakashi! YAY. I wonder who else is there. Will they demand Naruto back? Will Naruto want to leave? I don't even need to ask if Sasuke will let him... I kinda know that answer to that.
    Great update.
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  • From on February 22, 2008
    Oh I've checked out some of your art and it's good. I love the avatar that you've made for your profile as well. Sorry for the fluff review but I couldn't help myself.
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  • From on February 21, 2008
    Sorry that I missed this chapter update babe, which was fine btw. Yeah sometimes a little angst isn't a bad thing. Life can't be all lollipops and pansies you know (which I am horribly grateful for). I see you have a Deviant account...I do too so I'll have to look you up although I haven't been on mine for a long time. I'm too busy trolling the y! looking at pretty smut XD
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  • From hisoka on February 20, 2008
    to go through such lengths for someone you love, thats either true dedication or obsession.hope you can update soon
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  • From serenagold on February 19, 2008
    I enjoyed reading the last few chapters. ^^ Naruto's sure got some conflicting emotions to sort through regarding Konoha. Sure, Sasuke may be determined that the two of them never go back, but he's underestimating Naruto's ability to get what he wants through sheer determination!

    Keep up the good work, Spoon! I'm looking forward to reading about what happens next!
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  • From EzriCandy on February 18, 2008
    Hi spoon!

    I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying this fic and I can't wait to see where you go with this. I did notice a few mistakes, but hell, who doesn't have them every once in a while.

    That brings me to my next little thing. I wanted to know if it would be okay if I went through and corrected the spelling errors for you and maybe add a bit of punctuation that might make it a little easier to read. I was looking to see if you had an email posted so I could contact you that way, but i didn't see one so feel free to delete this review afterwards. If its okay, please contact me at my email address (vinsseraph@hotmail.com)

    I'm not perfect, but I have a tendency to be a bit anal when it comes to making sure at least the spelling is okay (especially on another person's story) and I'll send you each chapter so you can review them and see if you like the flow a bit more.

    Thanks for posting this fic :)
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  • From Dreamfool on February 18, 2008
    I understand the updating thing but if you ever want to bounce a few ideas off of me go right ahead. I'd still love to bounce a few off of you so here's my e-mail Heyashleyjude@AOL.com. E-mail me so we can correspond.

    Interesting chapter. I can only wonder who the eyes belong to. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From LadyTintlet on February 18, 2008
    Aww. theyre so cute together.
    i like the way your story is going and i also like your writing style. please keep writing!

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2008
    Who was the mysterious person watching them? And wil they get caught by the Konoha nins chasing them? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 18, 2008
    waaaaaaaah! ok, i'm done being childish about the short chappie, especially since you said you'd make up for it. LOL! what i wanna know is how the duo plan to ditch their pursuers. i know you won't disappoint. i like the tender moment about how sasu understands naru's pain and wants to help ease it, not just to use him as a baby oven (still chuckling about that!).

    ja!
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  • From tash1021 on February 18, 2008
    yay new chapter

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  • From Madamdragon on February 18, 2008
    Aw that was so sweet. Please update soon!
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  • From LadyRonin on February 18, 2008
    i can't speak for others but i liked this short little visit into sap land. when you read an angsty story itis always good to throw in a little syrup to even it out. i curious to know who was watching them, but i have not counted out kabuto as he was in that village and could have followed them. although i do wonder why sasuke didn't notice he was being followd. i can't wait to see who they have in the search teamihoping that sai will be one of them. lately i have itching to see a kabuto and sai pairing and this looks like it is ripe with the possibilities to do so. thanks for the update and can't wait to see the next one.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on February 18, 2008
    thanks thanks thanks soooooo much for writing!!!
    And I hope you keep what you said and write soon this week, and the chapter was just fine, not to mushy or anything, at least I love it! And Im really intriged about everything: can't wait for the mpreg(Imkindaintoitnow), can't wait to know what eyes were watching them, can't wait if they will meet with the konoha people that's traking them
    SO MANY THINGS!!!! I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS FIC!!!
    PS: gonna have a look on the artacount you said
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