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Reviews for Midnight's Moon

By : spoon10488
  • From LadyRonin on April 18, 2008
    thank you thank you for the update. i would never have guessed it was pakkun watching them and the explaination for why sasuke couldn't see them was nice as well. i also like how you potrayed kakhi's feelings about naruto. ususally when people write about their relationship they have kakashi giving preference to sasuke it's nice to see how he cares for naruto because i believe he does even more then sasuke. plus i like how you made it seem as if sasuke was getting permission from naruto's dad for his hand in marriage (i thought that was so cute). i wonder if they will return to village in secret years later to see all their (well naruto's friends) years later with their kids (although to be honest one should do). why did you have kakshi and the gang cover up the fact that sasuke kidnapped naruto and why did they allow sasuke to keep that bracelet on naruto. i can not wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From nyge98 on April 18, 2008
    This chapter was great. I thought Naruto was so cute regarding how ditzy he was. It was great. I can't wait till the ncxt chapter.
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  • From mrk33 on April 18, 2008
    I feel the happiness. Next chappie please.........
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  • From LadyTintlet on April 18, 2008
    Ahahaha!
    having neji kiss him was Genius!
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on April 18, 2008
    ah, ill just wait for the name to turn red in my almighty Story Monitor extension for firefox before i go looking for it in there. all bow to the almighty firefox. and the person who created said extension.

    i loved the kiss at the end. i hate neji/naru, but i loved naruto and sasuke's reaction to it. i just loved sasuke period this chapter. kakashi too. can i kick neji? i dont like him at all.
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  • From mls on April 17, 2008
    i love this story!!! i hope you continue with it!!!! i can't wait to read another chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on April 17, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAY! I loved this chapter too!
    Yeah naruto seemed reaaally out of it in this chapter, but it was awesome anyway!
    And the quotes sakura did of sasuke OMG I cound't stop laughing while reading it imagining the others faces as they heard!
    I like everything so far, and Im really glad they got to be together without problems with the others. I just hope that later on in the story you get them to visit naruto and sasuke sometimes, because it would be too much for them to never see iruka, kakashi, sakura tsunade and the others ever again, but I think that would be for muuuuuuuuuuuuuch later on.
    Anyway thats my only sugestion, I hope you get to update soon!!!!
    Sorry this got kinda long today, but I've been really anxious for this chapter to finallly appear!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on April 17, 2008
    This chapter was so good! You wrote all the characters' personalities really well...I loved the father figure Kakashi, Neji kissing Naruto and making Sasuke jealous, and Sakura leveling out a part of the forest was priceless ^_^ Also Sasuke helping Naruto through his mental attack was really tender and sweet. The way you describe things is amazing and you have a real skill of setting up scences and getting across the emotion. Update soon!
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  • From VRon8899 on April 17, 2008
    Love love love!!! =D I've been following this story for awhile...i just don't know if i've reviewed it or not...i'm a horrible person!! >
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  • From rubyred on February 29, 2008
    hey to answer your qestions on Matt...Matt! AKA Mail Jeeves third in line to be heir to L he was a a wiz with comps and blowing shit up he can dirves at 100 MPH and NOT crash!
    his b-day is feb 1 1990 he's a red head with issues about succes that stopped him fom bieng first in line
    He's my fangirl love.
    once a apon a time..before the DN anime relesaesomeone made him a fan art redhead
    and it stuck..
    till the anime came out...
    and he was shown to have brown hair.
    I like him as a redhead so...




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  • From EzriCandy on February 29, 2008
    Good Chapter! I love the fact that Kakashi avenged Naruto. Usually its Sasuke or Iruka, but to me, even though Kakashi doesn't show it, he really does like Naruto as more than just a student. Its hard not love someone like Naruto as family, lol.

    As for your email, I didn't get it :( Here is the addy again as well as another one. vinsseraph@hotmail.com or ezzy.valentine@gmail.com . I look forward to the email :-D
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  • From nyge98 on February 25, 2008
    That flashback gave some really good insight into Naruto and what is really going on in the village. I loved the new chapters. Though the cliffhanger broke my heart. LOL. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From hisoka on February 25, 2008
    breakdowns,didnt know they could be triggered that easily.sasuke took a long time to try and help, so kakashis there wonder what hes going to do sasukes still weak and narutos on the edge fo a breakdown (no help there).curiosity, hope you can update soon
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  • From elementalmoon on February 24, 2008
    Argh! I can't wait for the next chapter! You've done a great job! :D Hope to see it sometime soon, but I'll be keeping an eye out either way. Until the next time!
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  • From Dreamfool on February 24, 2008
    Oh, I can so picture Naruto as a drooler. I can already invision fights about that habit. As for Kakashi, thumbs up. I believe that if he ever saw someone he truly cared for in such a situation he would snap. He lost so many important people to violence that all those feelings of guilt, pain, and anger (at himself and those who hurt his loved ones) that it would completely overwelm him. I can't wait to see how Sasuke explains all that he's done.

    (On a side note. Have you ever stopped to wonder what would happen if sleeping beauty was a drooler? Wouldn't she eventually die of dehydration or something like that. This is just a random thought that occured to me one day and doesn't deserve a comment)
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