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Reviews for Midnight's Moon

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  • From Rosebud on July 28, 2007
    YAY!!! You updated!!!! And yes, it's a lot easier to read now! ^^
    Awesome chapter btw! I can't wait to read the next. I'm really loving this...Update!!! Update soon!!!! LOL!XD

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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 28, 2007
    Great second chapter! Very easy to read and I don't remember any spelling mistakes. I really like the plot of this story! :)
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  • From LadyRonin on July 28, 2007
    i just know that when naruto wakes up sasuke is going to have a collar on him i can feel it. at least that's wht i'm guessing what saske is going to go and pick up. looks like the mpreg possibilities are still up (yeah). i hope that since he is going to sleep for a couple days that naruto will at least get some ramen out of the deal. thanks and can't wait for the next update.
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  • From blueh on July 28, 2007
    ^^, I'm liking where the story is going... and how Sasuke is planning on making Naruto 'his'. >.< Keep updating.

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  • From Chria on July 28, 2007
    It sounds really good. I enjoy Sasuke sneaking round kidnapping Naruto and the cold thinking in his POV. Please continue this!
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  • From Zigana on July 28, 2007
    I'm interested in reading more. Enjoy your vacation.
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  • From Vex on July 28, 2007
    Oooh! New chapter. Very nice.
    I can't wait to see this item that will keep Naruto 'his'.
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  • From roely on July 28, 2007
    yes i would to see where this is going.
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  • From sailoir12 on July 27, 2007
    i love this chapter when i got to the end i was so upset cause i was all involved in the story i cant wait till you update i am really looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 27, 2007
    Very good beginning! I like this so far! :)

    Two things though, you should try to separate the chapter into at least two paragraphs so that it is easier to read and also, you should check your spelling because there were several misspelled words. Other than that, it was a great first chapter. :)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 27, 2007
    Naruto is going to be pissed!!! You have to continue this. Please!
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  • From Rosebud on July 27, 2007
    Ok, first off my opinion on this story is that it’s good! I like the set up, and the fact that Sasuke’s taking Naruto against his will. It’ll be interesting to see how Naruto reacts when he realizes what’s happened and I'm also curious as to how Sasuke is going to keep the blonde from dragging them both back to Konoha.

    Now, concerning the layout, I do have a suggestion. You might want to go through and separate the content into smaller paragraphs and do the same in regards to the text. It'll make the story easier on the eyes.

    Other then that, I think this fic has a lot of potential and I hope that you’ll update soon.

    ~Crimson2006

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  • From LadyRonin on July 27, 2007
    your story has a very good start. i wonder about the jitsu that sasuke did on naruto will it do anything to him besides make him sleep. are you going to include itachi since you did not mention that he was dead burt that sasuke was dragged back to konoha. will the hokage send someone after them or the council. because depending who sends them it will also determine who will go after them. is oochimaru and/or kabuto dead because it does not say and i want to know if they will show up in the future as well. this has the potential to be a mpreg (not that it has to be) but i want to put my vote in jic (just in case). is sakura, ino, or hinata going to be a help or a hinderance to the romance of the boys. will this story focus on the journey before eventually returning to a hopefully different konoha or will they be leaving forever. if you are not decided yet i choose the later. everyone always brings naruto back at the end of the fic but actually i don't think they deserve him. i hope that you will continue this story.
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  • From TFizzle on July 27, 2007
    OKay, now that you have my attention,
    what happens next? Your story has a lot of
    promise....UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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