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Reviews for Enslaving Naruto

By : akiravadel
  • From YamiKaeko on August 05, 2007
    Sad but good. update soon.
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  • From ANON - R.Y on July 26, 2007
    I liked it. I think you should continue. Maybe try writing how Naruto has to adjust being back in the village, and needing sex, Sasuke trying to help him with his problem. etc
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on July 26, 2007
    this is a really great and interesting beginning to a great fanfiction if you decide to write more. And if not it was a great one shot as well. but i would like to read more.
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on July 26, 2007
    well writtenn i like it. im thinking its ore of a
    short story like mayb 3 chapeters, but it does have
    some possiablity of becoming a full on story.dunno
    it hard 2 say for now i say come up w/ ch. 2 n we'll
    c how ur public luvs it for u 2 cont. or not. best of
    luck and i hope 2 c nuthi chapter up soon. ur new fan
    AoiKitsune =^-^=
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  • From spoon10488 on July 26, 2007
    please continue. I really like this story.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 26, 2007
    That was rather abrupt...
    It would be better for this story to continue. Have a chapter with the trek back. Having Sakura, Sai and Kakashi finding out about Naruto's condition along the way is up to you. I would have Kakashi realize AT LEAST the bare minimum of what had happened, if not more. (I mean, it IS Kakashi, not some clueless genin we're talking about here.) Tsunade, of course, needs to know what happened when the group goes back and tries to heal Naruto. I don't know whether you would want Naruto's cravings to be solely satisfied by Sasuke (which would reinforced the need to not let everyone know that Naruto is back since his condition is so deeply inflicted) or have Naruto throw himself at anybody's feet. I think having Sasuke fulfilled his needs would be best but have Naruto conflicted over being so needy and ashamed of that at the same time. Also, since Sasuke himself craves Naruto, him being possessive of Naruto wouldn't go amiss. That would work well since the title is, after all, "Enslaving Naruto". Itachi doesn't have to be the only one that enslaves Naruto, if you get my drift.
    Itachi needs to go and search Naruto again. A must.
    Naruto suffer some major physical, emotional, and mental abuse here. Have a flash back that shows how Naruto got out of there since it was clearly not an easy escape. I mean, if Naruto couldn't have escaped when he didn't suffer that much, how the hell did he successfully flee after TWO YEARS of abuse?
    You have SO MUCH material to work with here! Don't end this story so prematurely!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - fan on July 25, 2007
    hehe that was hot..
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  • From ANON - kyu000 on July 25, 2007
    very fast... but not in a entiraly good way. they havn't seen each other in years and within the first half hour(?) thier already having hot man sex? even though i like naruto's 'problem' that could've been cool if u had sasuke refuse (cuz he's supposed to be a friend or watever..) that first night and then dunno after some stuff in the village a night er 2 later sasuke gives in and... WALAH! lol good plot though! i've already read nearly all the ideas that were wit itachi n naruto part in dif. fic.'s ....except for the belt... may-b its just me but i never actully READ with that done 0.0 personally i think rewrote with a little more details or somethin to slow it down a notch would make this atleast 4*'s(outta 5)
    p.s. if u do decide to continue this story, i just had to ask. "did naruto REALLY completly escape, or has he been sent or somthin by the evil caniving itachi? o.-?
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  • From Stacy on July 25, 2007
    please continue!!!
    i can't wait to find out more about naruto's time with itachi!!
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