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Reviews for Enslaving Naruto

By : akiravadel
  • From on November 24, 2007
    I absolutely love this story, are you planning on continuing it? I hope that you do and hey if it's just a case of writers block I understand, so please understand I'm not trying to rush you. I would just be a little sad to see this story get forgotten.
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on August 08, 2007
    Oh i like where this is going. Can't wait for more! :P
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 07, 2007
    Ah thank you, I'm glad I could see your vision. Nice chapter. Is Sasuke fighting his inner dark-self that wants to make Naruto his possession? I mean he spoke of owning Naruto, like his brother did, only to now speak of love and them being lovers. Sasuke never did like to do anything like his brother did so it is understandable that he would want different with Naruto even if some hidden part would want that. Hee, hee Sasuke just standing there watching the show. I laughed at the part where Tsunade thought Naruto would be safer at Sasuke's house . . . well, I guess it all how you look at it huh? I mean that's like asking the fox to guard the hen house you know?

    "Here Sasuke take this cute little uke to your house and make sure you keep him nice and safe." Insert drooling prevy Sasuke holding cute little uke Naruto. "Oh I know just the spot." You pan over and you find the two naked, Sasuke holding Naruto on his lap. "Here Naruto my lap is the safest place for you, I even have an anchoring device."

    Okay sorry about that, I really need to go work on my own stories don't I? LOL!

    Anyway, liked how Sasuke was being good to Naruto, taking care of him and all. Naruto getting all flustered was well done, loved his excuse. "I got to go pee."

    Can't wait to see what you have in mind for this next, keep up the good work and take care.
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  • From serenagold on August 06, 2007
    awww.. mushy goodness. ^^
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on August 06, 2007
    greatness cant wait 4 more
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  • From ANON - sailior12 on August 05, 2007
    oh my god i thing that was the sweetest sex scene i have ever read i had some tears and a big smile on my face and everything and did i mention the awwwwwwwwwwwwwww factor awwwwwwwwwww
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2007
    mushy
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  • From Rosebud on August 05, 2007
    Ooohhhh, I LOVED this chapter. I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are so loving towards one another. I really wonder if things are going to be that simple. Is Itachi, going to come looking for Naruto??? Hum, I can't wait to find out!!! o.0
    Anyway, I hope you update soon. I'm really enjoy reading this fic!XD
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  • From serenagold on August 05, 2007
    Oh my gosh! I am incredibly turned around and impressed by what you did with this chapter! You've turned a somewhat gross but semi-interesting oneshot into something incredibly three-dimentional with alot of intrest!
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  • From spoon10488 on August 05, 2007
    very cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad you continued the story. =)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 05, 2007
    Very glad that you continued this. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 05, 2007
    I like that chapter 2 slowed down a bit. Poor Naruto is so confused, hopefully Sasuke can help him. Can't wait to see what you have in mind for those new seals. Are those going to be able to hold back Kyuubi? I mean the 4th's seal didn't why would these? I hope you stick with this.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 05, 2007
    Interesting plot you have going on here, I really enjoyed this first chapter. Though my first reaction was to chuckle at your disclaimer; to paraphrase the story has rape, humiliation, and disturbing images . . . have fun reading! It occurred to me that kind of warning would seem terribly wrong to a lot of people . . . so what does that say about those of us that find it fitting? I like how the story has some elements from the manga but, you have added your own twist. It was interesting that it was Itachi that broke Naruto and made him addicted to pleasure but, you put in there that Sasuke as well had always wanted to enslave Naruto for his own. Hmm, it seems the brothers Uchiha have much in common. I see you have a second chapter, I'm off to read it now. You have my interest.
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  • From Rosebud on August 05, 2007
    This is good. I like it! Please update soon!^^
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on August 05, 2007
    YEAH!!! You continued the one shot. This is great. I can't wait to see where you take things. ++ I wanna know if Itachi really would just let him escape like that. And are you going to bring Kyuubi back?
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