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Reviews for Craving For You

By : loopdiz
  • From Bookworm51485 on July 26, 2007
    Well that was definitely entertaining. I'm not completely sure I should take it seriously, but I definitely found it entertaining. One problem though, I want to see more individuality between the 'semes' and the 'ukes'. At this point it's like all the semes are like 1 character and the ukes the same. Even to the point where instead of individual reactions everything is described as if it's the action of one person. I wish that you'd focus a bit on the individuals.
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  • From Starryeyedstar on July 25, 2007
    I don't want to come off as a bitch, believe you me...

    I still noticed some typos, but that's normal, nothing to stress over. The paragragh structure was a little thrown off, but that could have happen when the file was uploaded.

    The only two problems I have are the four semes and ukes...they act too much alike, each character has a personiatly that would benefit the group they're in and frankly make the fanfiction more interesting in the long run.

    Just just to point out...if someone grabbed a handful of Naruto's ass...he'd bitch slap the mo-fo, even if he was in love with said person.

    I'd also like to see flashbacks on how the pairs met and why want each other and so on, I feel that it's very important for the story line. Just try not to cramp all four couples into one chapter, otherwise it could get confusing and be much more work for you. I had to find that out the hard way.

    Now, I have to find me some NejiGaara to nurse my craving since I'm not the biggest GaaraLee fan out there.

    Hugs and Kisses,

    Starry
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  • From nekoleopard on July 25, 2007
    hehehe that was so funny and finally a Gaaxlee it's been forever since i'v read one.
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  • From lovemeornot on July 25, 2007
    I LOVE IT please write more
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  • From Stacy on July 25, 2007
    the fantastic 4!!! i love it!!!
    it suits then to a T.

    what i would like to see are flashbacks to how and when each of the F4 meet their ukes. and to be honest i really don't like the way the F4 refer to their boys as their women. maybe if the F4 didn't say it out loud and kept it in their toughts. the story is awesome so i'll be happy as long as update every 5 minutes........no?
    how about every day?????
    keep up the great writting!!
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  • From lilkkjo082004 on July 25, 2007
    please update tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
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  • From TheGingerLady on July 25, 2007
    Hahahah this will be a bast to read! I love the parings and I like your style! ceep it up! and update soon!
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  • From Daktalakpak on July 25, 2007
    I dunno what to say or think. I am thinking positive things. I found this story quite funny and entertaining. I didn't take it seriously. I took it as a comedy which I hope it was. Dear god if you really are serious about making this a story that should not be taken lightly. ;)

    Anyway, update soon. I'll be waiting.
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