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Reviews for In the Beginning

By : vanessaclarke
  • From Leeana69 on November 10, 2008
    Of the dozen times I have read this story this is the first time I have reviewed. I'm sorry, forgive me. ;_;

    Excellent writing, I love this pairing and you do it so amazingly. :drools over the story:
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  • From Kodos on December 02, 2007
    mmmmmm, me likey. This was just a delicious bit of backstory. I really enjoyed it! Thank you for writing it. ♥ I like how Itachi thought he was a pervert because Naruto looks so young. Sixteen to eighteen isn't so bad! Ummm, still illegal, but not so bad anyway. ;D
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on August 07, 2007
    Wow, this fic was great!!!!! I loved it!

    One part kinda reminded me of Harry Potter though..."They stumbled to the couch and fell onto it while he tried to suck the boy's soul out through his mouth." Since when did Itachi become a dementor? lol ^_^
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  • From despairs on August 04, 2007
    Now that the original has been completed...i am extra excited to see how this story turns out :D
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  • From ANON - Q on July 27, 2007
    ....teehee.

    And now I can't stopped giggling. XD
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2007
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehehehhehe

    man, i love your "what the hell.." stories. ^^ they are so awesomely cool and funny at the same time.

    sure, i knew they'd get together in the end from reading the other story, but damn it all if i wasn't cheering the two along the entire time. Itachi worrying to himself that he might be secret childmolester was the best. Heh. I love it!

    Keep up the good work. I'm still waiting to find out how the wedding will go. ;)
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  • From cynaga on July 25, 2007
    Beautiful!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 25, 2007
    This was great!!! And no I don't mind scrolling, much better than those people who "update" and you don't even have to scroll at all. And your final line, talk about prophetic hmm?
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  • From on July 25, 2007
    Omg. That was totally awesome. That was great seeing how they got together. I loved it. Great work as always.
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  • From Rosebud on July 25, 2007
    Ah, I loved it!
    This story was so awesome and I'm glad that you wrote it!
    I like how Itachi was straight at first and then 'only' had eyes for Naruto. That was cute!
    Ooohhhh, I just love this pairing and I hope that you write LOTS and LOTS of Itachi/Naruto in the future!
    Keep up the good work...
    ~Later

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  • From MidnightsKeeper on July 25, 2007
    that was awesome. i really love how you portray their relationship. is jwthwt? over or is there more? i really love that story.
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  • From crazychemgeek on July 25, 2007
    Hooray - so good to see Itachi and Naruto falling for each other. Such a sweet story, unlike the dirty, hot "Jesus What the Hell Was That" I don't know which I like more :)
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  • From despairs on July 25, 2007
    Yay a prequel! The first chapter is perfect already and i'm soo excited to see how Itachi and Naruto meet and fall in love.
    I'm rating this a 5 of course..thank you for writing a sequel, you are the best! *grins*

    Oh btw your other story Art and Artifice is still one of my favorites.
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