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By : Mako75
  • From Sayuri on February 13, 2008
    ; - ; Poor Naru-chan~ That was awful (not the chapter, what happened). I want to keep reading and find out what's gonna happen with Sasuke. I want to believe that he won't be sold/given to his mother but I dunno. But since Sasuke seems to be falling in love with him and all, I don't know if he can give him up. Please update soon, I'm interested in seeing more development.
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  • From Dreamfool on February 13, 2008
    An update so soon, thank you. I like how you did this chapter.
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  • From narutovixen383 on February 13, 2008
    Poor Naruto!! That made me sooo sad!! I hope that snake and those bitches seriously get it because they deserve to be beaten down and tortured. Grrrrr those bastards! I really hope that in the end Sasuke will decide that he wants to keep Naruto and he won't give him away. It would make me very sad in the end if it didn't work out. And seriously, mad props to Gaara! I liked the fact that he was willing to look out for Naruto. If not, then I seriously could see Naruto wanting to kill himself and it would have made me even more saddened. Though, I kind of do see it in his future. My email address is angelchick383@yahoo.com. I would like it very much if you would email me and let me know when you have updates because I really enjoy reading this story!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From solitare1 on February 13, 2008
    Awwwwwe, that was soooo sad. But this story is sooo good.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 13, 2008
    this chapter was full of blood, jealousy, threat of seperation, pain, tears, and even spit and i loved every word of it. if naruto's papers are false does iruka know naruto's true parentage. thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one.
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  • From Dreamfool on February 12, 2008
    That is evil. How can you do that to poor Naruto. You big meanie. Sasuke had better make all three of them pay, no four. don't want to forget the snake bastard. I also think Itachi should have a hand in the revenge. I know the manga version wouldn't bother, but your's seems to be a little more human.

    P.S. You still havn't mentioned how Sakura got her papers changed. I understand you need to wait to explain Naruto's, but I would like to find out how hers got changed too.
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  • From MALLRATS2007 on February 10, 2008
    GREAT STORY love it how do we find out when you update i would love to know
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  • From Sayuri on February 10, 2008
    Nice fic, I quite enjoy it. And I want to see the rest of the story, yet I don't really want to read the next chapter because I know something terrible's gonna happen to Naruto ; - ; Please say Sasuke (or anyone) will rescue him before something happens. *sits and cries* Poor poor Naru-chan!! But their relationship seems good and I like the direction it was heading in, yet not sure what you have planned ahead so can't judge. Hope to see ya update.
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  • From dyessie on February 09, 2008
    omg. its so cool.. what will happen now? oh where the hell is sasuke haha well i want to see naruto to fully submit to sasuke. its nice to imagine him accepting his true feelings and all. its so great. you must update sooooonn..! and oh! i believe that your story will survive the long run. :D
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  • From Imagy on February 09, 2008
    wowzers~!
    what a wonderfully angsty story, babe
    so full of delicious smut...
    can't wait to see what happens next~!
    ;D
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  • From UzumakiLover on February 09, 2008
    Oh poor naruto...its not fair! Kin should get her ass stomped majorly!....save the blond...;_;

    love the story...i'm like beyond addcited to it...the last time i read it, you stopped on the chapter when Naruto stabbed Sasuke's tires after finding him high and trying to drive home....so I had a great time catching up...only for it to stop here. Man...what a heart stopper!
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  • From sweetciel on February 08, 2008
    I've been rading this story from beginning to end for the past couple of hours. I am now one of your loyal, obsessive, die hard fans. It's just soooooo good. I need now. If i beg pretty will there be another chap added this month? Please...pretty pretty please with sugar and cherries and love on top?? *pouts cutely*
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  • From charmpit on February 08, 2008
    Wow.

    This is intense.
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  • From love2bug63670 on February 08, 2008
    NEED MORE UPDATES!!!!!!!!!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 07, 2008
    AMAZING! i only have one question WHERE DID 7 NEW CHAPTERS COME FROOOMMM???!!! I love this story but i dont recall seeing it being updated... and i check this site all the time... ah well it was SUCH a pleasant surprise to come home today and see and the stuff that have happened since sasuke was high and didnt want naruto to drive him home.

    Eagerly awaiting to see what's gonna happen next once they scar him :S

    oh aannnnddd :( why are you making them go awaaayyy for months?? I adore the interactions with the rest of the cast as well. neji and sasuke? *tears* SO ADORABLE, gaara an lee :S and of course darling darling kiba. I dont want us to leave them! *cries*

    That said, lol awesome job you got going on here meng! 2 thumbs waaayyy up
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