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By : Mako75
  • From hanyou on September 21, 2008
    *relief*

    i'm so glad that sasuke was so damned picky when it came to who could possibly handle somebody like naruto. and when he was so arrogant to think that nobody was good enough (but subconsciously he is...) and that he wouldn't be able to handle seeing naruto day in and day out. wow. what a thing to base ownership on. because he wouldn't be able to handle seeing naruto, sounds to me like unbidden love.

    aww... mikoto! she's such a sweetheart (and naruto calling her a ghost...) methinks that if she had bought him, naruto would have remained in the house, regardless of her traveling preferences. she knows her sons better than one would think. and i love that she's quite alright with how sasuke's treating naruto. and she knows what they're feeling more than they do.

    and the boys. the hawt, hawt boys. that was an awesome lemon. quite yummy in fact. i liked it very much. maybe because i like riding only second to wall sex... and the way sasuke came to understand that the fundamental things that he liked the most about naruto hadn't changed. the pretty face hadn't made naruto something he liked, it was just a pretty face. but now that he has scars, they make him interesting. and sasuke's slowly realizing that, i think he will.

    but he wouldn't be able to send naruto away. he loves him far too much to do such a thing. and yes, he does love him, even if he doesn't want to admit it. and naruto's too confused to know what to call the emotion he's feeling, because he's let go completely and given sasuke everything. something he's never done before, something that scares him, but at the same time, i think it excites him.

    lovely story darling, great update!

    *loves*
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  • From nelorae on August 24, 2008
    I love this story. Is there anyway you can email me whenever you have a chance to update? ( nelo raven at gmail ) Please update when you can. THANKS!!
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  • From ANON - stanashine on August 16, 2008
    Wow this story is so interesting!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter! Please update soon!
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  • From Anissa34 on August 13, 2008
    This is an AWESOME fic... I'll be patiently awaiting your next update.
    Anissa34
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  • From animeluver91193 on August 06, 2008
    mm! that was good.
    im so glad to be able to read an update.
    i really wanna know what happens when sasuke sees naruto again.
    i hope to gods it ends in a happy way :)
    thanks! i look forward to more.
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  • From MichiTheThird on August 01, 2008
    That was such a good read! Chapter 18 was intense!
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  • From hanyou on July 30, 2008
    yay! a lovely new chapter from you!

    man... and what a wonderfully dark chapter. i love that sasuke finally gets his revenge, that you get to find out so much more that happened between the uchiha brothers and orochimaru, and that we get to see naruto acting a bit desperate. that's a wonderful touch, btw.

    yeah... naruto masturbating... that was hot. i can't wait for him to see sasuke again. please tell me that sasuke's going to not care that much about the scars on naruto's face. he's going to consider the bids because he's an asshole, but when he sees cute, innocent, foxy naruto, he's not going to be able to see him. please? please tell me that. because i need a sasu/naru ending damnit.

    and wow. itachi's overreaction to orochimaru mentioning sasuke.... i loved it! you got the characterization down pat. it's great stuff. itachi isn't sexually attracted to his little brother, but damnit, he's not going to let anyone else hurt him. and he's not going to let anyone else take advantage of the little uchiha.

    oh! oh! and the little bit of ita/naru... *drools* of course, little naruto is a horny beast but he can't help it when itachi comes up behind him, ambushes him, and smells like sasuke. it's like a sensory kick in the head or something. i love it!

    this story is great. there were some mistakes that i saw, but nothing to large of anything. i can offer my services to try to help beta while master of the rebels can't, if you'd like! you know how to get in touch love!

    *loves*
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  • From spoon10488 on July 29, 2008
    awesome! Yeah Sasuke! Orochimaru is dead, haaza! Great chapter I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - mignonne422 on July 28, 2008
    wifey! That was fantastic awesomeness! I like the the way you conveyed everyones emotions from desperation to cold resolution to narutos nervousness and desires in the previous chapter. You rock hardcore babe! I can't wait to see where this goes!

    Mush!
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  • From ANON - Tall tree-san on July 28, 2008
    Wow, loved it!! Please update as soon as you can. It's been so long since the last one. But the special was awesome! I hope Sasuke doesn't send Naruto away, when it's pretty obvious that Sasuke really likes him alot :(.
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  • From gilliath on July 27, 2008
    I love it. awesome chapter.
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on July 27, 2008
    Not bad!
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 27, 2008
    Yay! Sasuke killed Orichimaru!! Yay!! Now, off to the bigger problem; Naruto. I hope Sasuke decided to keep Naruto, and if not, then, I hope Naruto ends up in really good hands!

    -Damp
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2008
    oooOOOoo... I liked this chapter. It was very dark! ^^


    Sasuke can't get rid of Naruto! The scars just make him even cuter!
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From DragonsDancers on July 26, 2008
    i'm happy to see you are still writting looking forward to the next update
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