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Reviews for Playing with the Toys

By : Mako75
  • From Rosebud on July 28, 2007
    Wow, I loved this chapter!
    Keep up the good work and Update soon!XD
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  • From ringpop on July 28, 2007
    "A slave is kind of… a person working on a cottonfield or something" Dude what the hell are you trying to say?
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  • From hisoka on July 26, 2007
    sasukes angry and horny. or PMSing i cant tell.
    updates
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  • From serenagold on July 26, 2007
    EEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....


    Orochimaru is always so creepy and disgusting. >< bleh!
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  • From Rosebud on July 26, 2007
    I loved this chapter!!! So, Naruto already knows Gaara huh? Interesting! I can't wait to see where you take things from here! XD Keep it up!!!!!!^^
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  • From LadyRonin on July 26, 2007
    i thought this was going to be another sasuke (cruel master) and naruto (poor sorry sad slave) fic but this is turning out to be something a little different. the fact that you made sasuke a manwhore who slept with everyone he knows including oochimaru has made it kind of funny. and punishing naruto by taking away his ramen instead of having sasuke do something sexual do him was a nice touch. i have seen no signs of incest and hope to see none (thanks for that). can't sasuke and itachi just have a twisted relationship without bumping uglies. of course naruto would have to have known gaara before but is there a significance to him calling him by another name. anyway i really like this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From UneLore on July 26, 2007
    Love this story, can't wait to read more ^^
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  • From hisoka on July 26, 2007
    hahahaha,nice twist noone thought he was talking about ramen.keep it up
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  • From LindyStar on July 25, 2007
    OMG OMG OMG I love this! There have been a couple slave-master stories I've read, and I've liked them all, yours included. Keep up the good job, I like Iike!
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  • From OceanBlue on July 25, 2007
    Ahaha. No ramen. That's a cruel and unusual punishment. o_O
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 25, 2007
    No ramen! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo how can Naruto survive without his ramen. I must know!
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  • From aliakenobi on July 25, 2007
    Oh that was awesome, "no ramen" worst punishment ever! Well, worst for Naruto, lol. SO OMG this story is like.... wow. i swear, i never would have thought it from the summery but wow, this is now a total fav of mine! Just the progression of the story is, so, well, ideal. I cant even express what this story is like... actually i could but it would turn to a slightly perverted essay. Keep writing, i cant wait for the next installment. the way you have written the kissing is so perfectly erotic! Cant wait for more!
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  • From Rosebud on July 25, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!
    I really like your style. I always get so absorbed into this story and then when I get to the end, I'm like "nooooo I need more, " lol. But seriously, this is an awesome fic and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  • From KansouAme on July 25, 2007
    HAHAHA Sasuke is cruel.. no ramen.. *snicker* love the story!
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  • From TheGingerLady on July 25, 2007
    LOL oh OMG! this is just too good! "No Ramen." Oh man that evil and very smart! your a grait author! I realy like this fic!
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