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Reviews for The Ramen Club

By : MissMayumi
  • From blueh on August 01, 2007
    Ehh?? Why stop there? It was getting so.. steamy. Haha. And O.O Neji jumped on Gaara? I thought Gaara would be the one jumping. Oh well, it doesn't matter! Hehe. ^^,
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  • From UzumakiLover on August 01, 2007
    Oddly enough, I'm kinda sad Sakura doesn't get any lovin'...strange I would care about her. Still, go Naruto go...feel the love...go with the vibe! Omg, be gentle Sasuke-kun!!! I really like the idea, Breakfast club has to be on my list for top faves! Hmmmm I wonder...are you gotta bust out with a dance sence too? that was classic!
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  • From ringpop on July 31, 2007
    Oh....that.....was hot.....damn...."Damnit…I can’t stand Sakura, she’ll probably stalk me the rest of the day." Lmo!! DIE SAKURA DIIIEE!!hahah although she isn't that bad in this fic....MORE SASUNARU MOORREE!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER LOVE!♥
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  • From YamiKaeko on July 31, 2007
    Yes I loved it more please!
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  • From Peggi on July 31, 2007
    More crack! And you know, we make an awsome team ^-^ It just gets better and better, and I suspect I shall have chapter 4 in my hands soon as well :D I can't help but be amused with the little fact that even with chapter summaries I still look forward to new chapters. I am looking forward to the next chapter...because I KNOW stuff XD
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  • From vegaqixi on July 31, 2007
    YAYYYY! Now for chapter 4!!! Great work!
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  • From Rosebud on July 31, 2007
    GO NEJI!!!!!Hehe, I'm glad he finally came out said he was GAY! And he kissed Gaara!!!!
    And HELL YA, Now Sasuke and Naruto are getting it on in the bathroom, those horney boys!
    I wonder what Orochimaru is going to say when he finds out.... -LOL-
    I can't wait!XD

    Oh, and I'll be updating my stories soon, sorry it's taking so long. I got to go over the chapter, send it to my BETA and as soon as I get it back, I'll post! Thanks for reminding me! :)
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  • From Silkylove on July 31, 2007
    this story is really funny in it's own little way. Can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
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  • From Sessygirl on July 31, 2007
    LOL, I haven't seen the Breakfast Club in ages... I think the last time was my junior year of HS when I skipped with a friend... but you don't need to know that. XD

    This fic rocks, I love it. Everyone seems very in character and it pretty much cracks me up all around.

    Keep it up.

    -Akiru-
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  • From TheGingerLady on July 31, 2007
    totaly hot! can't wayt till the next chapie! I actualy like sakura this time! and I totaly LOVE Garras atitude! And way to go Naruto!
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  • From tasukigirl on July 31, 2007
    There are a few problems with your story. First of all, your parody of The Breakfast Club is based on an American high school system, but you stated that your story is set in Japan. The systems are completely different. There is no detention. There is no collective detention. There is also no such thing as Saturday school. Some schools do still have school on Saturday, meaning regular lessons but most schools don't and the only students on campus are there for sports and club activities.

    Japanese laws also come down really hard on any type of narcotics. There's no way the principal would have lied to Sakura's parents.

    Also, Japan doesn't have the same set of stereotypes as we do. Japanese students have to test into their high school meaning high level students are all at the same school and low level students are all together. You wouldn't have a student like Gaara at the same school as someone like Sasuke. You're also missing the details of a Japanese school, but that's less important. Another detail- Japanese kids can't drive. You have to be 18 to get your license in Japan. I know it's fanfiction, but details are important. ;) Don't underestimate research.
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  • From YamiKaeko on July 31, 2007
    hahaha uh oh. *snickers* please update soon!
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  • From vegaqixi on July 31, 2007
    Hot, hot, hot!!!! More plz!
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  • From ursweetheartless on July 30, 2007
    ^.^ OMG that was awesome. sasuke and naruto making out in a closet, classic
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  • From Anaheyla on July 30, 2007
    HA! This is good. I eagerly await you to continue.
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