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Reviews for The Ramen Club

By : MissMayumi
  • From crazychemgeek on September 21, 2007
    lol - cute chapter, I really wanna see Naruto looking like a girl, I hope someone with some talent at art does some fan art for this :D
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  • From Madamdragon on September 19, 2007
    Yay! Finally an update! I'm glad to see Sakura taking part in it some how! I love that song! I so had to listen to it while I read! Hope another is to come soon! Great job!
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  • From digiditz on September 18, 2007
    I feel all special getting mentioned by name. This chapter was definitely a little more "on track". The whole Neji and Gaara in the closet was great, and the Naruto makeover was the perfect way to end the chapter.

    Okay, let's see if i can give you some helpful suggestions. Five was fine as it was, it was just a little short. It still had the proper "feel" to it. You're heart didn't seem to be in chapter six, and it was reflected in the story (Which still didn't seem that bad to me.I wouldn't even have noticed if you hadn't told me at the start that you didn't like it.). It might have been better to have Sasuke and Naruto have sex without explaining that they were stoned(sometimes explaining things to much can take away from the story). Then during the truth and dare part have someone mention the fact that Naurto and Sasuke ran off together and have Sasuke and Naruto forget it happened. Then the whole deja vu thing will flow a bit more naturally.

    And above all else remember to have fun with it! Writing is always easier when your are enjoying yourself and what you are doing.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 18, 2007
    hehehehe i sense more sasu 'blanking' naruto in the next chapter, if ya know wat i mean *wink wink* Can't wait, the 'scenes' lol are usually a bit short but still very hot.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 17, 2007
    OOOOH I wish there was a picture of what Naruto looked like. Is he suppose to look really girly in the face Are you going to finish where the movie ends or are you going to do an epilogue. Either way I can't way to wait to read your next update.
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  • From gaara89 on September 17, 2007
    This is so cute!
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  • From Rosebud on September 17, 2007
    OMG love! This chapter was awesome! Neji and Gaara were so hot! And Naru-chan got a make-over haha, I love that! Oh and then there was the dancing. I'm so glad that you had me watch TBC and I'm even happier that you wrote this story! I can't wait to read the last chapter! Keep it up and I hope that your BETA sends the next chapter back soon. XD
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  • From crazychemgeek on September 01, 2007
    Hooray - I haven't had time to read my "stories" (kinda like my cousin watches her "soaps" only my stories are cooler). Anyway I check out the Ramen Club and you have 2 chapters for me to read. Lucky me! I have to agree with you about the last chapter, it wasn't your best work. Still enjoyable, but didn't have the same flow as the early chapters. The one before was pure Miss Mayumi and very enjoyable :D. To answer your response - ROFL stands for "Roll On The Floor Laughing" I always use it when I laugh so hard I almost (and sometimes actually) fall off my seat :D. Can't wait for the next update :)
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  • From UzumakiLover on August 28, 2007
    Oh no way hun! You may have loved her longer than me...but not more than me!! so there! haha well I'm glad you both liked the story. It was with that story I was able to let go of all my anger aimed towards Sasuke...I'm at peace with the Uchiha now...heck I did name my car after him heheh^^
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  • From digiditz on August 27, 2007
    You know what? I think you may be rushing yourself to churn out chapters as fast as possible for your "fans". Don't worry about us we'll wait. When I wrote fanfiction in the past I made that mistake and could no longer enjoy writing.

    But anyway, I liked this chapter just fine. I eagerly await your next chapter.
    Love ya tons!


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  • From gaara89 on August 26, 2007
    It was awesome! you're a great writer! this is both funny and well written...please continue soon!
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  • From vegaqixi on August 26, 2007
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Cliffy! But still awesomeee!
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  • From Madamdragon on August 26, 2007
    Too funny! 'He dared me too!' I had a friend who got dared to do the same thing...but the guy promised her $, cause she was too goody goody...so she did it...At least I wasn't alone that day. LOL!!!
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  • From Peggi on August 26, 2007
    Eh, I think everyone slacks off after writing long chapters and updating frequently. I know I do. I thought it was good. It was shorter than the first chapters but it was good nonetheless. I thought it was pretty intense the first read-through when Sasuke was upset with Naruto but I like how it all turned out! I absolutly LOVE this story and please please PLEASE don't get burned out on writing it because it is sooooo good ^_^
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  • From Peggi on August 26, 2007
    XD chapter 6 is now posted but I just have to say, for two people who don't even know what getting high is like (aside from a bad experience with NyQuil) this turned out really great! And you're very welcome for the Gravitation episode ^_^ I will be posting 5 soon, I hope!
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