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Reviews for Oh, How the Mighty Fall

By : VRon8899
  • From serenagold on August 30, 2007
    I just had to read this again (giggling madly the entire time =^^=) and I have to say, its just about one of the hottest things I've ever read.

    hehehehe. We need to collaborate more often. I wish I was a writer, but I'm so not. I am an illustrator though, so if you ever want me to return the favor, feel free to email me and I'll draw you some custom made Naru-smut. ^^ hehe

    Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see some of you other commissions too!
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  • From Ukagau on August 29, 2007
    oooooohhh. = > Very nice story even if the pairing is original! Thumbs up on it though. My favorite part would be when Gaara tells Naruto that if Kanku had touched him (which he did), Gaara would have to kill kanku. Oh boy, did I love that. Made me feel all ooey gooey inside. =D I know you don't know if the ending is good or not, but I like it a lot! I don't know if it could happen any other way with the way the story is. great job as usual. Don't fret, writing hard peices just as experience under your belt! -gives some ramue and rice candy-
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  • From serenagold on August 28, 2007
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    I love you. =^^=

    It was everything I'd hoped for and more. hehehe.
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  • From Ukagau on July 23, 2007
    Nice. Some smexy thoughts to pnder over at work! Maybe not hte best thing to read before hand, but it will keep me...happy XD Very hot, very nice! Can't wait for the next one!!!! (Don't work to hard!)
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  • From ANON - Kellie on July 22, 2007
    Its so great to find a fic like this. I enjoyed reading it very much. For some reason, while reading this, I pictured Sasuke & Naruto doing "pony play" with Sasuke refering Naruto as his golden stallion ^^. And I really look forward to the next chapter =^__^=
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  • From spoon10488 on July 21, 2007
    thank you, thank you, thank you! That was awesome! I loved it, very hot. =)
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