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Reviews for The Legendary Sucker

By : theblueblue
  • From serenagold on August 14, 2007
    ahhhh!!! You continued it!! hehehe ^^


    Another excellent chapter. I loved Tsunande's restraint of Naruto and Sakura's horror and shock at finding out what she had to do. >:) Jiraiya's manipulation was once again, also brilliant.

    This story is so awesome. I love it! Keep up the good work.
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  • From blacky on August 14, 2007
    That was AWESOME.
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  • From serhoth on August 14, 2007
    I love naru/tsu stories, I wish more people would write them. Anyway I think you did a good job keeping them in character, which id say is hard to do in a story like this. Look forward to more.
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  • From manicandyshumway on July 19, 2007
    The characters are in character and the plot is believable. It's a little rough around the edges in terms of flow (there are a few cases of repeated words and redundant ideas) and the smut is a tiny bit cleche but these are easily curred by experience and a good beta (editor). I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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  • From saiyanprince1 on July 19, 2007
    wow lol... so did she teach sakura lol
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  • From ZackSamurai on July 19, 2007
    well i say that you should continue this piece. it was really well written and descriptive also while maintaining the characters personalities. great work! hope to see you continue this story,
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  • From orismoris on July 18, 2007
    Hope naruto is still the main man, when tsunade and sakura and shizune want their fill. update soon
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  • From UnlikelyLoveUnlimited on July 17, 2007
    I enjoyed this. although you narration and character development could use just a spot of polish, it was a well executed, compitent fanfic. I am personally a huge fan of Tsunade/Naruto I would enjoy seeing this one-shot pairing continued into a multi chapter fic, becaue I think this has potential for far more than one chapter, and the way you have set it up so far, It would kind of funny to have those two ending up together ultimately because of jiraiyas perverted medling.
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  • From spiritwolf30 on July 17, 2007
    I thought this story or fic was really good I just hope that your planning to go on with it I would love to see it Naruto and Shizune go at it and I mean go all the way and then ith Temari but that is just me ayways keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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