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Reviews for The Legendary Sucker

By : theblueblue
  • From blacky on September 20, 2009
    I dont know how the hell I didn't notice this second chapter before but.. DAMN.

    As hawt as that was, its almost as if Jiraiya stole BOTH chapters for being the manipulative super pervert that he is.

    Jiraiya you sly LITTLE devil!
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  • From Darkmanu on May 19, 2008
    great story man though its sad u not updated it in a long time its been stuck at 2 chapters for ages any plans on still taking it further ?
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on April 06, 2008
    You got my heart thumping so hard it’s about to burst out of my chest… good thing people don’t actually get nosebleeds from lust, or I may have bled out long ago! I love this story; I've read it several times. Lady Tsunade is the only female character I actually like enough to read about. As for the 2nd chapter I’m not terribly fond of Sakura but Tsunade being a secondary character in the ‘assault on Naruto’ made it very amusing. Thanks for a great story!
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  • From blacky on March 28, 2008
    Hee hee. Although you can't help but note that some fifteen year old just busted a nut in a fifty year old woman.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 16, 2008
    Oh my! I normally don't like Sakura... she's my least favorite character, but in this piece... interesting. I liked it!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 16, 2008
    Ohhhh yeah! That was hot! I like the pairing!
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  • From JasonBanks on January 04, 2008
    This is a great story. You have a well-thought out plot with a healthy amount of sex. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Update again soon!!
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  • From ZackSamurai on December 06, 2007
    man i just reread this story again and its awsome! i just hope that you havent abandoned this story. please update soon. its too good of a story to leave unfinished. also, is tsunade gonna teach shizune how to be a legendary sucker too?
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  • From takun on September 11, 2007
    Great story, really. Well writtain, spaced well and good mood for it. I agree to, theres dozens of other ideas you've set yourself up to play with, such as Shizune like you mentioned, or maybe Anko and so forth. It's a great opening, and a lot of potential. I cant wait to see what happens if you continue this, hopefully. Take care.
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  • From morgoroth on August 17, 2007
    never mind i found more errors when i looked... but overall its sill well written and has few errors considering that you have no beta
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  • From Zendura on August 15, 2007
    Fucking HOT! That's all there is to say really, I mean damn! Good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2007
    now you should either include shizune some how or maybe have a face off for the title.
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  • From manicandyshumway on August 15, 2007
    *combination jawdrop and nosebleed action* The first chapter was nice but the second is just wow.
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  • From morgoroth on August 15, 2007
    the only flaw i could see was in the first chapter... but now i forget where it is... anyway if you ever need a beta (like if you wanna get rid of your current one) i am available and would make myself available however you want (like through msn orwatever messenger you use or through email). the only thing is i usually get on the computer somewhere between 6 and 10 and are on til anywhere between 1 and 3. so yeah... if you want a beta i volunteer... i read a lot and being a beta is just fun for me
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  • From ZackSamurai on August 14, 2007
    thanks for the update i give it ten out of ten! cant wait for the next update, and good work on keepin sakura in character, hope you update soon,
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