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Reviews for Jiraiya Does Konoha [NEW Chapter By DeathJunkE]

By : manicandyshumway
  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 28, 2008
    Someone needs to remind me to breathe! I damn near passed out these stories are so hot!
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 08, 2007
    yay new chappie!! it was great. i loved dei-chan (i do love him) and i'm having so much fun seeing jiraiya in these situations. wonderful chapter, and i can't wait to see more!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 27, 2007
    nice. i'm really liking everybody's stuff. adrinix: that was really good. i liked the jiraiyaxasuma ...ness. it's been interesting to see new pairings i haven't even thought of before.~
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 21, 2007
    hi! i have an idea for jiraiyaxkakashi. i did see that someone wanted a sakura/kakashi, but if you can't contact them, then i would really like to do mine.
    email: authress16@yahoo.com
    summary: the new ichaicha's coming out, kakashi has no cash, and he's obviously very upset. jiraiya strikes a deal with kakashi. they'll sleep together, and kakashi can have a free copy.
    i really like what's been done so far on this fic, and i would love to contribute. please consider me? thanks!~
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  • From Brooke741 on July 31, 2007
    My idea is a Jiraiya/Sakura/Kakashi...

    Sakura and Kakashi after they failed to get Sasuke back on this last mission...Kakashi goes to Sakura's house comfort her, only for them to start having sex...Jiraiya happens to pass by, and see, and he joins in.
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  • From llyoung on July 26, 2007
    Shikyaku, your chapter was fantastic. I love the way you write Sai - he is very funny. Great foursome. Thanks for the chapter.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on July 25, 2007
    What a fun, sexy chapter! Great job with the foursome - very easy to see in the mind. As always, Kotetsu's dirty-talk was inspired, and Jiraiya's observations about the promising young pervert cracked me up. I very much enjoyed the mental image of Sai sucking on his fingers, wishing it was a penis...

    Loved it!
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  • From inediblefrogs on July 18, 2007
    Hmmmmm... Sounds interesting, and kafm and Grumpy are on board. =D

    Let me know if you'd like a Sai/Jiraiya chapter. You can skim through my Finishing the Portrait chapters 1&2 for a sample of my writing, and a basic idea of the background for the PWP artistic-research-devolves-into-smex kind of thing I have in mind.

    shikyakunj@hotmail.com
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  • From Inigeshi on July 16, 2007
    wow i'm sorry i didn't know there was some one with the same idea i'm sorry but as you said different styles of writing ... well i can re vamp also..

    jirai hits on hinata at a resturaunt but is rejected. later Jiraiya is walking through the training grounds looking for naruto but he instead comes across the two hyuga's during a moment of intamacy. he then realizes why he was shot down. Hinata and neji somehow miss his presence but then about a month later when the icha icha vol 92 mauscript is mailed to neji as a preview. both hyuga's aleep with jiraiya to get him to remove that part.

    is that better?
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  • From katsuyo on July 16, 2007
    Two things:

    I thought I would bring this up before I get an email from you regarding the matter. I have noticed that someone has submitted a similar story idea to the one I put in. I personally don't have a problem with this. We're two different authors with vastly different styles and pairings. If anything - I am curious as to what the other author will come up with...
    Besides, this is supposed to be fun!

    Also, I have no problems being the first cab off the rank as it were in terms of story submission and posting.

    Okay - that's it. I'm going back to my hole in the wall now. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Sincerely,

    katsuyo


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  • From Inigeshi on July 16, 2007
    I want to do one with hinata and temari. Jiraiya needs some insperation so he sneaks into a private hotsping. not realizing this was property of the hyuga main house he gets an eye full temari and hinata having sex. (maybe after a whle he's invited to join.)

    RuthAcon@aol.com
    DeathjunkE@aol.com
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  • From katsuyo on July 16, 2007
    Hey...this sounds like a fun project and I am definitely interested.
    My idea is a threesome with Jiraiya, Kurenai and Anko.
    Basic Plot description for "Now, that's what I call research!" - Jiraiya goes down to the Baths to do some research for his latest book. He is disappointed when he discovers that there are only two women there enjoying the waters. The disappointment soon turns to excitement when Anko puts the moves onto Kurenai and starts seducing her right before his pervy eyes. Anko hears someone moving around behind the wooden fence. When she discovers that it's the ero sannin himself, she suggests that he would get better material for his new Icha Icha if he does a little hands on research rather than just watching the action. Of course - Jiraiya is always up for a challenge.

    If you like the idea, just drop me a line via email. My email is marshall_marjorie@hotmail.com.

    Thanks!

    sincerely,

    katsuyo
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  • From Himoto on July 16, 2007
    Well, much to the dismay of others I am going to snag Naruto. A sort of 'coming-of-age' meme, no pun intended.


    Anyone who needs to get a hold of me, my email is located on my profile.
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