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Reviews for The Unexpected

By : Hekikuu
  • From demona013 on July 13, 2008
    PLs pls pls, continue.
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  • From sakuyalove on March 26, 2008
    I really liked the begining of this, you should pick it back up.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on October 30, 2007
    Please update this!
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  • From KyuubiKit on October 23, 2007
    more....please this can't be a oneshot...too good.
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  • From anndragera007 on July 16, 2007
    oh damn! you had better finish this!
    that was major HOT!!!!

    please please PLEASE! more! must have more!
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  • From serenagold on July 16, 2007
    OH MY GOD> > > > This better not be a one shot. I want to find out what happens when they "finish it later," heh.

    I mean, sure, I've got a good idea of whats to come... but its just not as good as actually reading it. >:)

    hehe, keep up the good work!
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  • From monrque on July 15, 2007
    i cannot believe you lift me hanging like that.
    this good pleaseeeeeee continue
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  • From Kingcobra on July 15, 2007
    Figures. They get interrupted. Was somebody spying on them? And what happens next?


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  • From sunlight159 on July 15, 2007
    I really liked it!! and i def. think you should continue it!! I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From Loupiotte on July 15, 2007
    Ending it like that, that's nasty! I just can't stand waiting for the next chapter. Your writing is simple but very much to my liking, go on!
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  • From emp78 on July 15, 2007
    You have to continue! Who's interrupting them and why? When will they finish? Update, Please?

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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 15, 2007
    All I can say is... that was hot!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    Wow!!! That was awesome!!! Hurry with the next one!!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 15, 2007
    Ooooh, if you don't continue this my Orochimaru haunt your dreams!!!!!
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