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Reviews for Parthenogenesis

By : TRG
  • From EmmPeace on September 11, 2013
    Ahh please finish this story its so good!!
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  • From ANON - rebekah on November 22, 2009
    NOOOOO why must it end, finish it quickly PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - rebekah on November 22, 2009
    ow and thanks to my brother every on in the library at his school is reading it as well.........
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  • From ANON - sarah on November 22, 2009
    this is great i love it
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  • From ANON - rebekah on November 22, 2009
    ............I will forever be your loyal fan girl.......I was reading this in class and well....I am an open book when ever I get an emotion I react to it......when ever sasuke did something I either screamed "yes" "finally" or just did a little happy dance.........now my whole class is addicted to your fiction.......I am the only girl in my class...... :)

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  • From ANON - saintash86@gmail.com on October 16, 2009
    i have to day this is the one of the top if not the best use of explaining how 'i a guy got knocked up even though i sport a dick'

    i love you i feel very bad for the poor pregnant blond who walked all that way, and its going to be for nothing 'cause the guy is dead.' i think you should give him some ramen for that
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  • From fairietayle on May 20, 2009
    I love the set up, and the fact that you got the idea from school's biology class! I was also interested about DNA in my classes, but I was more curious about diseases and mutations and tweaking the DNA (combining for example human and cat) ;)
    I also love the way you've portrayed the characters, especially the new deeper dimension you've given Naruto. It seems like it's really and truly him. I'm fond of the way you showed that the villagers need Naruto. It gave me a whole new outlook on things. I also love how the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto has grown. It doesn't seem rushed at all - it moves at just the right pace. And the way you write is nice. It flows :D
    I sincirely hope you keed writing, you have an awesome fic!
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on January 21, 2009
    This story is simply amazing! You don't get good stories like this one here anymore.... matter of fact anywhere really. It's very rare to find a story as good as this one and I hope you continue it. Usually these stories are nothing but lemons, lemons, and more lemons. But you are doing such a great job, please continue!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 18, 2009
    That was chapter 18 not 8, sorry.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 18, 2009
    Ch.20

    Time for a new council, I say assassination. Just get rid of the council and Danzou in one fail swoop. And I'm sure between the rookie 9, Gai's team and all the sensei's (and I'm sure Gaara and his siblings would be willing to help), they could manage that easily.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 18, 2009
    Review ch.8

    Why don't they just selectively abort the fetus that kyuubi wants? Seems like that would be the obvious solution.
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  • From solitare1 on October 22, 2008
    WOW!! This story is really getting exciting!! Very well done. I can hardly wait for the next chapter....they dun went and pissed the old girl off!
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  • From Blckthorn on June 26, 2008
    I loved how you developed the story especailly the characters and their relationships! I like your writing style and hope to read more of this story. I was a little worried when I read that this story is about a year old. I hope you finish it and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2008
    Chapter 20: The chapter title is . . . odd.
    Oh no. His daughter died? ó_ò . . . . Jeez. This is putting Jiraiya in a bad light. . . . O.O Uh-oh. Serious uh-oh. It’s the Akatsuki. (I like how you led me on for a moment there.) . . . . Eh? I thought Jiraiya taught the Fourth. . . . Yeesh. (*shiver*) I’d hate to cross Itachi on a bad day. Actually, I’d hate to cross him on any day. I’d hate to cross him at all. He’s scary. ;_; (I like him, though.)
    Boy, Sasuke’s going to be pissed as hell (understatement) when/if he finds the burned Morio.
    “Council meetings were usually planned several days in advance.” Yeah, but they’re the council. I’ve been getting the feeling that they do what they want, and if anyone doesn’t like it, fuck them. The council cheats. D< . . . . Old fucks. (‘Scuse me.) . . . . Danzou. A total hypocrite if he’s a snake. . . . “Do you attempt to explain your actions to this council, then?” Man, these guys are pathetic. I swear, Tsunade should get a rebellion going. . . . (*sigh*) I feel bad for Tsunade. She’s got a temper and she’s forced to reign it in when around these freaks. . . . “As the leader of the shinobi of Konoha, only you have the power to order the Uchiha to rebuild his clan.” That’s bullshit. If the council can do as much as they can, they can do that themselves. . . . “This meeting is adjourned.” Hehehe, suckers. She may have suggested it, but she didn’t say she’d do it. They said “It’s your duty.” They didn’t tell her to actually do it, though. . . . Like I said: What if everyone just ignored the council and Danzou? What then? They’d probably be fine. . . . (*snicker*) Ah, HERE’S the mud cannon. Time to play dirty. ^_^

    I can’t wait to see what she’s planned out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2008
    Chapter 19: Love how worried Sasuke is. . . . “Naruto’s fuse seemed to be shorter these days [. . .]” Yeah, that is saying something.
    Boy, that must be hell. No ramen. . . . So you like his hair long. Just cut it and let it grow back later! . . . . Love how Sasuke’s trying to calmly reason with him. . . . Love the last line of that paragraph: “Naruto was so confused.” . . . . Uh-oh, the heat is rising. . . . What the – ?! What are they doing here?! o_O . . . . God, I hope this doesn’t embarrass Naruto too badly. (Then again, maybe it will convince him to wear the disguise.) . . . . Heheh, Tenten’s embarrassed. . . . Oh. I thought Naruto wouldn’t wear the costume. . . . Nice job, Tenten. ^^ And I like her interpretation. . . . Aww, I love her support. ♥ . . . . “Fate favors you.” I love that line. And I love Sasuke’s response. . . . HAH! Love Naruto’s elaboration on how he feels “girly”. XDD
    Heh. “Of course, why should he take orders from a book.” ^^ . . . . “Hey, it had happened before.” Lol. . . . Awww, massage time! ♥ . . . . Oh boy. *__* . . . . Love the sweet words Sasuke’s saying to Naruto. They’re making a hot scene. . . . Aww, so sweet. ♥ . . . . “He didn’t know how to respond.” I’m halfway between “Awww” and “Uh-oh” to that line.
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