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By : TRG
  • From LadyRonin on July 24, 2007
    thanks for answering my questions in chapter 11. you pointed out the loopoles but i am still wondering how the laws got passed without the hokages consent. i like how you showed naruto's outlook and the way he sees is position in the village. it was hopeful and hopeless all wrapped up into one and i love you for it. i guess sasuke and naruto are going to have some outrageous times being travelling parents. especially with naruto being so clumsy and sasuke being so overprotective. it would be nice to see sasuke blow his top over naruto and show his jealous possesive side before they have sex. i always believe that competition is the best way to a stable smexy relationship. since they are traveling i guess it would be to much to have gaara run into them while out doing suna business in another counntry or something. or how about someone else that naruto helped out previously like they could visit where the bridge builder lives and have a chance to see inari all grown up (even though he's younger then them it's only like four or five years). maybe he could call sasuke old man or something (i don't know). anyway thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on July 24, 2007
    This is a very interesting way to handle getting Naruto pregnant and exploring the whole starting a relationship thing you've got going with our boys. I'm very interested to see how that plays out and looking forward to possessive/protective Sasuke if you choose to go that route. Just pretty please don't make Naruto wimpy. I'm really interested in seeing how they are going to handle the Kyuubi baby...they already know that one of these kids is going to be the Kyuubi if not just heavily influenced by it but the boys don't seem to be thinking that about that.
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  • From ANON - moose on July 24, 2007
    yes you must be on crack!! dont deny it kid!!! lmao that was the most fluffiest thing i've read!! lol you are still amazing!! amazizizing!! don't worry you are definitely not the only one on crack >.< i feel like this will be soooooooo emotional im actually really excited over it ahahahaha keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2007
    I would like to see those two found their own village, once the children are born. Call the Hidden Sky Village. They would have their own home and ppl would not be afraid to come and settle there because of Naruto. They would be happy and not have to worry explaining to children as they get other about the hateful looks they get because Naruto is their 'mother'. I hope you make one of the babies a girl too. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From naruchan on July 24, 2007
    (Damnit, it keeps only posting like half of my review >.< I've had to remove it and then add it again like three times already..)

    Wow. I just had the FUNNIEST mental image! Kyuu as a baby. Like, a little tiny bundle of squish. Then the little innocent baby leaping up and pulling kunai out of thin air and running around attacking people. It's the perfect definition of "ninja baby"... I love Kyuu XD

    Anyways, on to the point... SQUOOT! ADORABLE! *mucho huggles* I totally melted when Sasuke put his hand on Naruto's stomach, that was one of the most squee-worthy mental images I've ever had. I actually said 'awww!' out loud and my little cousin asked me what I was 'awwing' at... so I had to come up with an excuse. I said kittens. I guess it isn't ENTIRELY wrong... kinda-sorta-ish lol

    And Naruto having to disguise himself as a woman? That's gonna be HILARIOUS! I can see Sasuke talking to some dude who runs an Inn saying "And this is my wife, Haruko (or whatever name)" then Naruto stomping on Sasuke's foot hard enough to break bones xD

    You know I love this story to bits... so keep giving me more! Even if it takes longer between updates soon, I don't care, I'm hooked. If you stop posting this thing I'm gonna need rehab and therapy and... okay, maybe I need therapy now, but I'll still end up in the hospital from fluff-withdrawals. Don't make an innocent me suffer, keep on writing ^_^
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  • From nekoleopard on July 24, 2007
    yay i'm so waiting for the next chapter hehe it better be good lol
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  • From yaoigurl06 on July 24, 2007
    *blushes* Um...This might be a little perverted of me,but...is there going to be a lemon? Oh, and Who in the HELL did Natuto sleep with? O.O It wasn't Jairyria was it!?! Ewwwww, that's a bad mental image! Update soon! I need these questions answered before they eat me alive! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2007
    Yay
    update!
    That was an extremely sweet chapter. You are giving more depth to both Naruto and Sasuke, especially in explaining the unwritten laws in naruto's perspective. Cant wait for more. =D
    ~Schy~
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  • From Stacy on July 23, 2007
    this story has a great story line!
    i wake up every day just to see if you updated.
    ***buuuuuuut*** please let sasuke and naruto have some hot beefy sex before long.
    Please!!
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  • From MissMayumi on July 23, 2007
    ^_^ I loved chapter 11!! It was really sweet when Sasuke put his hand on Naruto's belly. He must really be shocked, and happy that his biggest dream is coming true. update soon!
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  • From bmoonblackdragon on July 23, 2007
    stupid concil...bakas...keep naruto away from them...keep the story coming

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  • From LadyRonin on July 23, 2007
    i return from otakon and i get two great new chapters thanks. i like that you had sasuke and naruto talk and began to straighten their relationship out. or at the first least straighten out their feelings for one another. i am enjoying the pace that you have set the story by. i thought that their chaste kiss was just appropiate before finding out the heavy news of naruto being pregnant. i found the unwritten rules of konoha to be interesting and original. although i wonder how the council made the unwritten rules of konoha without the knowledge of the hokage. especially when you consider the first couple of rules was agreed between the hokage and the coumcil but all the other rules were approved by just the council only. how could the fifth not know about the rule about him not having sex since that rule had to have been made during her tenure as hokage. what about the council and there interference in sasuke and naruto's relationship. is the loopole of the unwritten rules is that naruto is not to have sex with someone who can reproduce. or does the councul want naruto to remain a virgin. i can't wait to see what you do next in this story.
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  • From serenagold on July 23, 2007
    YOur secret laws of Konoha idea is BRILLIANT! Simply brilliant and they flow so well with the series. Hell, I wouldn't be suprised if you find other fanfic writers stealing these for their own fics. It just fits so well.

    That said, you have no idea how much this chapter sucked me in and forced me to the edge of my seat while reading it. I was all like "Ohmigosh!!" and "Oh no!" and felt so upset along with Naruto when he freaked out at the news and feared his impending death! The secret laws make so much sense with his attitude towards others and his behaviors within the villiage, but the 5th one is just cruel. :( Though I just love his hidden confession of revealing Jiraiya got him laid either dispite the law or before he was 15 while away on that 2 1/2 year training mission after Sasuke's defection. ^^ It would so totally figure that would happen. And you rock.

    I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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  • From TheGingerLady on July 23, 2007
    I seriously dig your syle Tiki Rane Gobell. I seriously dig your style. Ceep it up!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on July 23, 2007
    The baby isn't going to be Sasuke's? ;_; WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! T-T
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